It's the Mess That Feels So Right... - Comments

two updates! you soil us... but i like it. (;
that was amazing. the part where she listens to track six and then realizes everything literally sent a chill through me. i had the biggest smile on my face. i cant wait for more even though i dont want this story to end. dont tell the others but its my favorite on mibba.

Awww, she finally figures it out- in the bathtub! Nice touch. I can't wait for the rest!

I really love this story. Can't wait for the next update. Make it be soon! :)

yay!

How ironic is it... that that chapter was for me... and you've got Automatic Eyes... my favourite Fast Times song? It's pretty weird, when you think about it.

OH EM GEE!! THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR!! The turning point.

I must say, I am oh-so-happy! I loved it! And as usual, it made me cry. 'Cause your writing is so AMAZINGLY well written that I can actually see how William and Bee were feeling. I hope, you know, that when you become an author, that you'll let me read it before everyone else. I believe that some day, you'll make it. =]

I'm acutally kinda sad that this story is ending. Will we get to see Caleb before it ends...??!

Anyway, I loved it! <3!

At one point, I unsubscribed. I think cuz I wasnt really into reading Gabe stories anymore. BUT I"M BAAAAAAAAAACK And I have terribly missed your wonderful plot line and the twists.

KNEW THE BROTHER THING WOULD HAPPEN. Will haaaaaaaaaaad to be an ass about it. Jeesh..

UHM I"M ON TEAM GABE. He's the one who should get the girl.

Ahhh I LOVE this story.
Update really soon!

I dont believe I've left a comment yet...or at least in a very very long time.

Anyways, you should know that this is basicly the only fic I read anymore. You've got the conflict, narrative, and action balance down to perfection and I can't wait for the update.

Your writing is fantastic, now...more please!

LOL @ PETE FLIPPING YOU THE BIRD.

You should have held up both hands; if I wasn't there in person I should have been there in spirit!Because I freakin' hate Wentz here.

But that's besides the point.

Bee better get it together. GabeRobot is on self-destruct. Abort, abort!

(Team Will never had a chance, MUAHAHAHAHAH!)

WHAT'S IN THE LETTER!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! (Oh, and go Vicky-T!)
And as for Bill, we all know that she's going to dump his gorgeous ass and move back to Gabe's awesomeness!!!!!

bout time someone yelled at Bee for being an idiot.
love the storyy!

keep it uup :D
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ahhhh! don't leave me hanging,
upate soon?
this story is super addictive.

Ohh, that was awesome. I'm so glad Caleb and Vicky-T got mad at Bee, because she needed to hear it.

Oh, and another thing; POOR GABE!!! He needs a hug.

And, I feel really sorry for William, because he's probably realised by now that Bee isn't quite as into him as he is to her.

She needs to open the fucking letter already. Grr.

More soon!!! xD

That was yet another highly impressive dispaly of wonderful writing knowledge!

Loved it...as always!

Cannot wait untill Ca;eb and Gabe come back though, im so hooked on this story....aaargh!!!!!!!

So Bee's feeling kinda but doesnt know who with!? Sounds familiar....lol

Aaaanywyas, cant wait to read the rest of it!!! (Although no hurry, as it is your Baby!) Hehe!

Just thought id add this lil' emoticon in coz its cool! --->

Love ya!!!!!

Gahh more suspense. I hope it works out for William =/

Good to see you updating.
I'm really liking it. :cute:

I saw FOB, All American Rejects and Hey Monday Saturday night. :tehe:
ANd I'm adding Caleb on twitter. :XD

Yaaay!
That was awesome.
Gah!
I finally have a computer back.
It feels sooo nice.
So Ima update my own stories. However! This is soo totally awesome as usual, and I can't wait for an update!
(And if you get the chance, when I get mine out here tonight or so.. You should check in to them. XD)

I want to know what's in the letter! It's killing me.
I feel bad for her though, poor girl is confused.
I miss caleb and gabe though, and his twitter is so funny.
Uhm have fun at your concert btw I am jealous.

SHE NEEDS TO READ THE LETTER. :grr:

I'm about ready to piss myself, waiting to see what Gabe wrote to her. (...probably about that song...) -cough- So um.. I miss Gabe, a lot. And I miss Caleb's crazy personality, and the cute little puppy Shylo.

I went the Caleb's twitter, it's lovely to see he is spending time with Gabe :D I wonder what Bee would think of that... :snob *sigh.* guess we're going to have to wait and find out.

more soon:)

Vord Vomit's awesome writing skillz:

With such an honest face, in a completely serious tone, he whispered, “I love you, Bee.”
I gulped, and whispered it back, knowing that it shouldn’t have sounded like such a lie; I should have been able to say it with confidence, with complete certainty.

From the crowds of people gathered around their computers, drinking up the words on the screen like it was water in a desert, comes the feverish cry of victory. From whose mouth, you might ask, did that exclamation of sheer ecstasy tumble?

Mine. Duh.

Waving my James Blunt cd around (I had to pause for a second, to relieve it of its duties. It was serving as a drink coaster), I bound joyfully throughout the house, screaming to all the world that TEAM GABE HAS FUCKING DONE IT AGAIN, BITCHEZZZZ. This victory lap is only cut short due to my disgust at having to hold the James Blunt cd for too long, and I gingerly set it down to go wash my hands.

That little story (hopefully, fictional, because if it was true then I would probably own a James Blunt cd) illustrated how happy I was when I read this update. Please, do keep at it. I want to see what's inside the note!