It's the Mess That Feels So Right... - Comments

HELL YEAH! GO GABE!

*SQUEEEEE*

This chapter was simply amazing. I loved it. I'm going to be sad when the story ends in the next chapter, but glad that I did stumble across it forever ago.

Cheers to you and your great work! Can't wait to see how it all ends. :D

holy fucking shit that was amazing. (sorry for the cursing i was excited) so when i saw you updated you have no idea how happy i was then when my computer froze and it was loading i was ready to throw my laptop out the window but... i didn't. and finally i was able to read the most amazing chapter to the most amazing story i have ever read in my entire life. and that last sentence was not a lie. this is truly 100% amazing. you are so talented and i'm almost depressed that the story is ending so soon but at the same time i cant wait for the last chapter. following this story has been amazing. oh and by the way definitely was not to cliche.

HOLY SHIT.. THAT WAS AMAZING.
and totally not too cliche.

SERAPHIM:

Hola.

I could help but notice Bret being your icon. And 'fotc' with a little heart across your siggy....

ZOMGFLIGHTOFTHECONCHORDSFUCKINGROCK!!!!

My friend and I are pretty much obsessed. They're coming to my town in April. Sorry, that was totally spam, but I felt it had to be said.

man i cried. i cried my little heart out :)

Really? You can't leave me comments? LOL

Mibba be z snappin' you, saying 'no you don't, bitchezz'

Anyways....

Gabe. Bee. Like it should have been from the start. End of story.

So, one more chapter 'til it's done. Where do I go from here? What will I live for? What will I plan my life around now?

You better be thinking about what you want to write in the future, babe. 'Cause I still want something to read.
-wails-

i really love this story.
AND i saw that you said " I bet there is nothing like a Gabe hug"
its true.
he has amazing hugs.
and his smell o jeez its amazing. hahahha.

Aaaargh Poor William!!!!

Thank gd Bee finally realised what was so "blatantly obvious!" lol

Seriuosly cool writing!! I wish I could read all of it...but then it would have to end for that to happen!!!

Love lots 'Ollie!!!!

x0x

CHIPMONKS ON CRACK, BOO-YA!!

Lyin' Eyes, Happy B-day. You awesome New Zealander you! :arms:

So, I'm not quite sure what to say, besides....Yeah, Gabe won the game, you can go home now.

But let's not go home quite yet, I wanna see the reunion! -blatantly disregards Will and his feelings-

I swear, my subscriptions lied to me alright, the little thing hadn't turned inactive when I looked at it yesterday, so as I said in maths, THIS LATENESS IS NOT MY FAULT, ALRIGHT? Either it was a) Mibba's fault or b) I went temporarily blind regarding "in"s on the front of "inactive"s. Not sure which is more likely, to be honest.

But never fear, I am here to comment these epic two chapters. Reading both of them at the same time was even more fun than having to wait between them, though I can't quite remember what happened in which chapter, I've already started mixing it up... I think I can remember though.

So now I shall begin!

Wow. Bee really DID get yelled at. I think she really needed it though -- if Vicky-T hadn't given her that little dose of reality, she probably would have been floundering around the whole tour, clueless of what to do. It's like, she knew what she needed to do all along, but she just desperately needed someone to tell her. I think she does love Will, and doesn't really want to admit that she loves Gabe more, y'know? Like she wants everything to stay the same and be easy, but she knows she's going to lose SOMETHING with whatever she does.

And I don't think she really wanted to choose what she had to lose.

Caleb is the most amazing friend, becoming magically awake despite those damned time differences. :tehe: He's so cute. He can totally stay under (on/in) my bed once he gets some time off from this story. Actually 'can' should probably be replaced with 'has to'. Or something to that effect. Whatever, I'm stealing him at the end, alright? Though I don't really want the end to come. Aah, what!? I don't want it to end! God, this is making me horribly sad.

Now, Will could have spazzed less -- he was being a tad temperamental! But I guess that's alright, considering he's been just trying to be with her and all that, but her mind is always somewhere else. I guess it all just exploded with that.

It made me so sad to see them arguing though. I don't like it. =/ Gosh, I'm still Team Gabe, but I feel bad for Will, alright. I could just go back to my typical, hey, look Will, it's Caleb! thing, but seriously, I hope they work it out or something. And he doesn't stay all pissed at her. That'd just be sad. He has pretty fair reason, but hopefully...

The end was cute though, with the realisation. And the song. :tehe: I love that song.

So, God, she loves him! Hooray! We finally got to that point!

... Wow. Jeez.

I don't want it to end, seriously. =(

geez, shes dumb to not have known.
but ehh, im like that too, it could be right in front of me and i would be like "huh?"
i knew it was that song!

i love this storyyy, update soon! i hope her and will talk to out and become friends again.
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Um, FINALLY! I mean, how long does it take for her to catch on with something like that!?!
Dump William and go back to Gabe! NOW!

oh, i'm so happy you updated. I was thinking last night when I was hanging up clothes 'she needs to update!' so yeah, i got my wish. thanks. XD

its so great that she realized gabe loves her. what william did was harsh, though. i'm sure if he was in her shoes he would do the same. who wouldn't?! (just because gabe is spectacular.) -coughs- well, she needs to get back home to Gabe, apologize to Vicky for making her yell, and see crazy caleb (:

That last chapter seriously made me cry, not kidding. God, I'm overemotional.

THIS FUCKING ROCKS MY SOCKS!

Okay I read the last two chapters at the same time and I was on the edge I my seat the whole time. I'm so happy she finally opened the note, and I'm sort of happy her and William didn't work out cause her and gabe for the win! I'm really sad there is only two chapters left but I'm so excited for them!

I love this, I really do. Sure it's hard to break William's heart but it's always been Gabriel. What a fantastic way to spend a snow day :-)

Awh, about bloody time she figured it out!! xD William's being a bitch, but I think, deep down, he knew that something was up.
I have a feeling I said that for the last chapter. xP
YAYYYY!!! She's going to fix everything!! I just hope she gets there before it's too late. x)
I love this story so much, and I'm going to be sad when it's over. That doesn't mean I don't want you to update, though. xD