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  • Four.Sided.Triangle

    Four.Sided.Triangle (100)

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    Canada
    Update?
    January 11th, 2009 at 05:39pm
  • Satorin

    Satorin (100)

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    i love ur story keep going!
    November 28th, 2008 at 08:42pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    34
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    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    Gender:
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    34
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    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    Member
    Gender:
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    34
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    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    omg, dude, I'm so sorry, my comp froze, and when it started working again, it just multiplied before my eyes! So sorry! Really, I am!
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:22pm