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  • silentaffections

    silentaffections (150)

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    The story is well- structured, but there are simply too many commas.
    November 26th, 2008 at 10:21pm
  • Elegant Crime

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    I really like this story.
    It's very well written.
    Post more soon.
    November 19th, 2008 at 10:19pm
  • Amethyst Violet

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    I like this story.
    October 26th, 2008 at 02:28am
  • Satorin

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    you finally updated ans so many chapter keep going on!
    September 27th, 2008 at 10:57am
  • Oneesan01134

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    Very nice! :D I enjoyed it quite alot!
    September 9th, 2008 at 05:21am
  • Satorin

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    that' avey nice story i can't wait to read more!!
    September 8th, 2008 at 10:30am
  • blu.

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    woah woah woah!!!
    this is really really good:D
    i lovee it
    update soon?
    <3
    September 8th, 2008 at 01:57am
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