December 30th, 2008 at 10:07am
I really like this story; it's different from most I've read.
I quite honestly despise the Jonas Brothers, but kept reading even after you brought them in.
Might I suggest the Spell Check, though?
There were a few misspellings that bugged me, but all in all, it's a great story.
(I've gotten in the habit of using your nicknames for the Jonas Brothers; I thought those were hilarious.)
What did you do with Logan's body?
I have guesses, but I doubt any of them are right.