Something Better - Comments

omg noooooooooo i hate cliffhangersssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
ahhhhhhhhhh
something very very very bad is going to happen, i can feel it
i dont like that feeling lol
more soon?

OMG! So AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

Oh no. This was it. I was dying. I was going into the light and then I would die. That damn fish really had killed me and now I was going to die.

i would SO say something like that lmao
duuude i was just talking to my friends today about how i would love to go on a yacht and like cruises and everything!!!
hahah i loved this chapter, they are so cute together =]
more soon?

SO SORRY FOR THE PSYCHO BABBLE JUST THEN... HEHEHE BUT REALLY ITS AWESOME

I LOVE THIS CH. IT WAS MY FAVE.. CRUISES' ARE THE SHIT... I WENT ON ONE WELL IT WAS FOR ONLY A DAY AND AND THE SHIP KEPT GOING IN CIRCLES IT WAS IN FLORIDA FT.LAUDERDALE THE SHIP WAS CALLED QUEEN OR PRINCESS BUT IT WAS AWESOME NONE-OF-THE-LESS.... AS WE WERE COMING BACK TO DOCK THERE WAS A LIL FISHING BOAT WITH PEOPLE U NO SUNNING AND DRINKING... THE CAPTAIN HONKED THE HORN AND IT WAS SO LOUD IT NEARLY BUSTED MY EAR DRUMS CAUSE I WAS REALLY CLOSE TO IT ... N-E-WAY THE LIL BOAT DIDN'T HAVE A CHANCE THEY COULDN'T START IT AND CONSIDERING HOW BIG THE CRUISE SHIP WAS IT COOLANT TURN SO WE RAN OVER IT BUT THE PEOPLE WERE OK CAUSE THEY JUMPED OUT BEFORE WE CRUSHED THE LIL BOAT IT WAS FUNNY AS HELL TO SEE BUT I'M GLAD THEY WERE NO FATALITIES.... THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST DAY OF MY LIFE BESIDES GETTING A LIL SEA SICK.... ALL N ALL IT WAS AWESOME..... N-E-WAY UPDATE SOOOOOON OK LOVE

Awww! I love that idea...great job, update soon :)

Joe's so sweet!

OH COME ON CLIFF HANGER.... NOT FUNNY.... I WANT THE CRUISE TO HURRY UP SO I CAN READ IT.... UPDATE SOOOOOOON

Totally understandable! I'll still be around. I love this story, so don't you worry. Just update when you get the chance! :)

okay then, update sooon :)
happy birthday (soon)!!!!

Great chapter! I loved how she was freaking out about not wanting surprises.
The end was so cute when he fell asleep!
More soon :)

haha i forgot about rachel, not gonna lie lmao
but it was a good chapter, i was sad that she and nick broke up ]=
i literally 'awed' when he was like crying for her to not break up with her
more soon?

hahaha! great update! :)
sometimes i forget how to spell easy words too....yesterday my friend asked me how to spell afraid....lol
update soon!

cute chapter
loved the ending

awesome! i love it!
update :)

As usual, that was great! It was good to havea lighter, more happy kind of chapter after evreything with Alyssa and the baby. Rachel and Joe were kind of hilarious at the ending. She kind of remind me of Rachel from One Tree Hill...but that's totally beside the point. Anyways, great chapter! :D

WTF? I can comment now? well, I can comment Krystina. ( I don't really have anything important to say.)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!
i just kept on "aww"ing throughout that whole chapter.
it was so cute! but then so sad! but then it got cute again!
THEY LOVE EACH OTHER! EEEEE!!

this is great
ilove it!
update soon plzzz! :)

Oh dear. The poor baby. I feel so bad for Joe and Alyssa. It's so sad still that they lost the baby but I'm glad that it brought them closer together. I know that neither of them stopped loving each other and I'm so happy to see them together again.

I would never send hate messages to you! Never! I hope thing sare going better for you! :)