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  • holysmokes

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    awww
    i feel so bad for them ]=
    but at least they can try again since theyre back together =]
    YAY FOR JOE AND ALYSSA BEING BACK TOGETHER!
    more soon?
    April 12th, 2009 at 12:35am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    aww great update
    poor Alyssa
    April 11th, 2009 at 11:46pm
  • sedated nights;

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    You KILLED the baby?!?!?! I know I haven't read the last few chapters but... HOW COULD YOU????!!!
    April 11th, 2009 at 11:00pm
  • NJluver77

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    oh, and joe should have told the doctor that he was the father of the baby, he would have told him then!
    April 4th, 2009 at 12:19am
  • NJluver77

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    oh, thanks 4 the shout-out, but this story is really good.
    I'm so frusrated though, at alyssa, for not realizing it sooner, and at joe, for ...actually joe was doing things right in my opinion. but i do think he's waited way too long to propose, and now its gonna make alyssa look like an idiot when he does :)
    update soon :)
    April 4th, 2009 at 12:18am
  • sandiebeach777

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    awe so full of love!!!!!
    April 1st, 2009 at 01:48pm
  • silent.tears.eternal

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    i thought joe was the father of the baby. who is ?
    March 31st, 2009 at 04:38am
  • lovespell;

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    Cry Clap

    Wow. I don't really know what to say. I actually read this a few hours ago and was trying to think of something to say that would do justice to how absolutely amazing that chapter was. I don't think I've ever read...well, pretty much anything on this site... that got me as emotional as that did. I read it on my Blackberry at work and I actually had to force myself not to cry sitting in the lunch room. :P

    I could almost feeling how much they were both hurting, Joe especially. I'm so happy that they are back together now. I've been dying for that to happen so thanks! I'm looking forward to seeing how they are going to deal with the loss of the baby. I can't even imagine something like that.

    It's okay that you were later updating. That chapter was enough to more than make up for it! Anyways, now that I've written you a book, I'll just say that I really can't wait for the next update. I'm actually addicted to this story :)
    March 31st, 2009 at 04:25am
  • keepthislovealive

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    DUDEEE
    THEYRE BACK TOGETHER
    AND THEY LOVE EACH OTHER
    BUT THE BABYS GONE
    BUT THATS OKAY
    BECAUSE THEYRE BACK TOGETHER!
    THEYRE BACK TOGETHER!! -insert fangirlish squeal here- EEEEP!
    March 31st, 2009 at 01:09am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    aw I'm glad they're back together!
    March 31st, 2009 at 01:07am
  • holysmokes

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    AW YAY THEYRE BACK TOGETHER!!!
    THIS MAKES MY LIFE!!!!!!
    haha the blonde doctor reminded me of carlisle cullen =]
    and yesssssss i got the first shout out!
    WOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
    lmao
    more soon?
    March 30th, 2009 at 10:11pm
  • keepthislovealive

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    what the frick.
    BABY GONE?!
    no.
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
    man. this sucks.
    March 26th, 2009 at 01:37am
  • NJluver77

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    this is really good! i love it! and i did not see that coming at all! update soon :)
    March 25th, 2009 at 08:50pm
  • lovespell;

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    Awwwwwwwww...I'm seriously crying right now.

    That's so sad that the baby died. I feel so bad for them both but I hope it brings them back together :)

    And you ARE NOT a terrible writer. You're an awesome writer so don't even say that :)
    March 24th, 2009 at 12:26am
  • ontheedge91

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    why Cry why you do that? Cry that's not very nice. No
    March 24th, 2009 at 12:13am
  • violets are purple.

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    oh nooo!!!!
    ...well *sniff*...it's a good twi-hic-s-st in the st-story-y...*sniff*...*hic*...*grabs tissue*
    lol :)
    March 23rd, 2009 at 04:10am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I cant believe she lost the baby...
    March 23rd, 2009 at 04:06am
  • DarlingDontLieToMe

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    Omg why did you have to kill the baby:(
    and I don't hate you, you did that for a reason but that reason better be good
    well any ways amazing story and update more often please
    March 23rd, 2009 at 03:40am
  • holysmokes

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    OHMYGOD!!!!
    i saw it coming and i still couldn't stop myself from crying ]=
    its so sad. i feel so bad for her and joe ]=
    more soon?
    March 23rd, 2009 at 03:37am
  • NJluver77

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    4 some reason it didnt send me an email for the last 2 chapters, so i just read them now.
    good job, update soon :)
    March 20th, 2009 at 01:28am