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  • pixiewayro

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    *squeals* <333333333333333333333333
    October 26th, 2013 at 10:09am
  • Justlovetohate

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    @ lizzicleromance
    I am so excited to read it! Thankyou so much for this story:)
    October 26th, 2013 at 07:08am
  • lizzicleromance

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    @ Justlovetohate
    Well, welcome back! :)) I think two updates is an appropriate welcome welcome back gift, or else I hope it is! And just think- the end of her chapter is only the beginning!!! An epic showdown is about to go down, oh my!! I am so excited to write it, thank you so much for your comment :)) <3
    October 26th, 2013 at 07:05am
  • Justlovetohate

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    I IGNORE MIBBA FOR A FEW DAYS AND I COME BACK TO TWO UPDAYES!?!?

    Fuck fuck fuck I've been waiting for so long for Brandon to find out and it's finally going to happen geeze Louise I'm excited. I've waited years for this party and as expected you guys did not disappoint, both updates were perfect.
    October 26th, 2013 at 07:01am
  • omgmcr101

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    ohmygosh updateeeeeeee
    October 25th, 2013 at 06:47pm
  • You'reJustASadSong

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    That had to be some of the cutest sex I've read. Other than the hotness, (I'm not a huge Gabe/Mikey shipper - I adore the idea of them together and It's a pretty awesome OTP don't get me wrong) but it was so CUTE! They were like, talking about their future but it didn't sound like, lame? (It was FAR from lame, it was fucking adorable) It just amazes me how you can combine so much smut with fluff without going wrong once! Yours and Lizzie's writing is flawless, I swear.

    Drama! Oh god, fucking Brandon I fucking swear I don't even know where to start... I mean, Gerard has been cheating on him with Frank, but Brandon's an asshole. That doesn't justify much as I can't say he deserves it as he Isn't the WORST boyfriend (but still pretty damn bad) but that's why I love this story! Other than Its obvious reasons, (those being, well, It's great, to summarise) but It's also quite controversial, which can be either good or not so good in stories (Its dependent) but since you guys pull it off sooo well, It's absolutely fantastic.

    So I can't wait for more drama, more smut, more fluff, more updates and whatever's coming next. =)

    xo Jen
    October 24th, 2013 at 10:04pm
  • Stomachaches

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    I'm.freaking out!!!
    October 24th, 2013 at 06:32am
  • lizzicleromance

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    @ NatalieMCR
    Silent reader? Well we appreciate you reading of course, however, we'd love to know what you think of what you read! :)) We'll fix the spanish later. Honestly the words could be complete gibberish, the point of us using Gabe's spanish was to turn our precious Mikey on... Which worked like a charm here. This was a filler chapter for sure, but the best kind that has my favorite character, Gabe telling it from his POV because the ending was sort of necessary and it leads to what's about to happen in the next chapter! :)
    October 23rd, 2013 at 09:52pm
  • lizzicleromance

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    @ RayTorosArmy
    Frank is with Gerard... Brandon is in the stall next to Mikey and Gabe.
    October 23rd, 2013 at 08:49pm
  • NatalieMCR

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    Wait no, I got it. Brandon is cheating. (I'm so stupid)
    October 23rd, 2013 at 07:38pm
  • NatalieMCR

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    Wait no, I got it. Brandon is cheating. (I'm so stupid)
    October 23rd, 2013 at 07:38pm
  • SachaSamaha

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    You roooocck
    October 23rd, 2013 at 07:38pm
  • NatalieMCR

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    (Hello, I'm a silent reader. If you don't want to you don't have to pay me attention but yeah)
    “Voy a joderle tan con fuerza, y tan bien esta noche, va a gritar mi nombre, bebé,”
    That's slightly wrong, if you want to say "I'm going to fuck you so hard" then you could put "Te voy a coger con tanta fuerza" (you could also put tan fuerte instead of con tanta fuerza) the other part is ok but change "va" to "vas" 'cause "va" is when you're talking formally.

    Also... What? Frank with... WHAT?
    Oh, yeah. I love this fic so fucking much, I swear. Keep it up, your writing is amazing!
    October 23rd, 2013 at 07:36pm
  • RayTorosArmy

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    why is frank with brandon im confused help me
    October 23rd, 2013 at 05:52pm
  • pixiewayro

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    Yay!!!! An update!!!! <3 oh, wow!!!! I'm so happy right now, because I mentioned one time that I would like a scene between Mikey and Gabe, and... BAM!!!! Wow! This really went above and beyond my wildest imagination, and I'm sosososo in love with this chapter!!!! I can't even... This chapter, like the whole fucking story, is just really, really amaaaazing!!!!!!!! Words can't do it justice, okay???? Okay. It does things to my heart, and I can't wait to see what goes down next!!!! Much love!! <3
    October 23rd, 2013 at 05:13pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this so much! <3
    Is the next chapter the one where Gerard finally breaks up with Brandon?
    October 23rd, 2013 at 02:13pm
  • WakeTheDemon

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    I'm absolutely blown away with this!!
    October 22nd, 2013 at 02:30pm
  • WhatIsLife-Kyra

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    Amazing chapter, I'm glad the news is out with the boys! I do hope Gerard'll break up with Brandon soon, it's been long enough, especially for Gerard, dont'cha think?

    Again, I loved it, and keep it up! xo
    October 12th, 2013 at 05:55pm
  • r0ck0n

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    sooo fucking happy you continued this story! it's literally the best fanfic I've ever read and it's awesome that you're going to finish it THANK YOU
    October 12th, 2013 at 08:39am
  • uunleashthebats

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    I haven't commented on this before (I don't think) although I've been reading for a whilebut um, it's pretty great and all.

    I just really wanted to be the 1000th comment. "Yolo".
    October 2nd, 2013 at 05:05pm