Her Escape - Comments

i really missed this story =]
it's great
i'm so happy Gee's okay =]

I read and as always I love your writing. Of course I'm going to slap you with a dictionary and hit you with grammar rule books, but this is okay. We're getting there. I do love this whole story though. (: Keep writing!

aww poor Jade :(
great chapter!

haha i should have the next chapter up today lol glad you like it :D

OMG!!! It's an AMAZING story!!! You must write more!!! Very intense. Love it!

i love it! more soon pretty please?

thank you so much. i'm so happy that you like it so much :D

haha her room IS my room. well Jade is me in many ways.

i will be updating sometime soon. i just have to find the time

i cant believe how great this story is :)
i love how its all the details of traveling, and the obvious fan jealousy.
and how they love each other so much, and just EVERYTHING about it.

her room sounds amazing too, sounds a little like my room, my room is all purple and black.

i cant wait for more :)

thanks. new one should be up in a few days.
stay posted

awesome update i hope gerard is ok and that his attacker gets what they deserve

haha thanks yeah i know it is unfortunate that Gee was injured
it was so hard for me to write this chapter and the next few coming chapters.

OH. MY. GERARD.
Poor Gee!!!!
I blame Eliza!! (I don't know why, but it must be her fault! XD)
I like the drama in this chapter, good job!

yay i'm so happy you updated!!
i love the way you described the city <3
more soon pretty please??

aw thanks. i'm glad you liked it. more soon :D

awesome update hun well done

hey loved the story will u write more or do a sequal?

thanks. yeah i would love for you to do that.
i will just send you my password and you can edit it right on the thing
it will be easier. your deff right about the peer editing it really does help.
thanks so much for the support it really means alot :D

if you want i could go through a couple of the chapters for you, send you back the edited versions. i don't have the time today, but i think i can squeeze some in sometime later this week.
i'm fairly good with tenses and stuff and it's always difficult editing one's own work because you already have the perfect idea in your head so you barely notice the mistakes so 'peer' editing comes in handy.
and i just remembered that the rating (stars) gets better with more comments, subscriptions, and reads so i'm gonna subscribe just to show my support even though i'm really keeping track of it through bookmarking where i leave off. lol.

~adriana

yeah i origanallly had different names for characters and i guess i miss a few changing them. i actually have a very hard time determinaning the tense that it should be in. and i think that uncertainty shows. i think once i finish i will be able to fix that better. i know i know the typos are so bad. i really have to go through again and maybe have someone else do it for me too.

~ch. 2~
again, i like this very much. *is excited for bri & jade to see mcr in concert*

a few criticisms though: you change the tenses a few times, from present to past. and there are some more typos.
but the thing that confused me was mentioning kerri and ron and not explaining who they were. i think that's all you really need to worry about, clarifying who those names are attached too.

otherwise very good. :)