Homepage › Stories › Her Escape › Comments

Her Escape - Comments

  • waitingforsomething

    waitingforsomething (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    Aaaw, I love dancing in the rain! Keep writing!
    May 25th, 2007 at 06:54pm
  • lawlzdumb

    lawlzdumb (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    I really like it so far, I especially like the idea of her room being the way it is, I wish my room was like that! Update please!
    May 25th, 2007 at 12:31am
  • Heartstrings.

    Heartstrings. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Singapore
    I don't k now what to say except:
    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
    This story is one I love!
    The subplot is amazing!
    Good job!

    XoXo
    Emmy
    May 24th, 2007 at 01:25pm
  • waitingforsomething

    waitingforsomething (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    I love her room XD Ooooh, I know what Brianna had to tell her! :O
    May 24th, 2007 at 03:29am
  • amante.della.musica

    amante.della.musica (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Location:
    United States
    I love it! More please!
    May 24th, 2007 at 12:39am
  • Heartstrings.

    Heartstrings. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Singapore
    I'm starting to grow fond of Frank in this story.
    He seems to be more of an adult now. A refreshing change.
    Again, your description style was amazing.
    I love it!

    XoXo
    Emmy
    May 23rd, 2007 at 10:15am
  • waitingforsomething

    waitingforsomething (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    Very sweet, I'm really glad Mikey's not going to push anything faster than it should go :D
    May 23rd, 2007 at 04:50am
  • waitingforsomething

    waitingforsomething (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    Aaaw, that's so cute! Keep up the updates, they make me happy, and you wouldn't want to make me sad, would you?
    May 23rd, 2007 at 02:06am
  • Heartstrings.

    Heartstrings. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Singapore
    Okay beautiful as usual.
    “Don’t make promises you can’t or don’t intend to keep”
    THta line in chapter 10 sorts of really changes stuff. I mean, first she was insecure and all. Next, she takes on this defensive tone. Nice. Human. Not many stories have that. Keep up the good work!

    XoXo
    Emmy
    May 22nd, 2007 at 02:47pm
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

    Lunacy.Fringe. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    I thought Brian was the tour manager......Oh well, and yes who is Kerri? Anywho, I love this and I'm going 2 subscribe!
    May 22nd, 2007 at 04:59am
  • Guard Geek 101

    Guard Geek 101 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    wow you have alot of discription I like it
    May 22nd, 2007 at 03:13am
  • Tre the Cool.

    Tre the Cool. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Canada
    I read the first chapter, and I think it is awesome. Your description was awesome. Way better than mine!

    I wish I could write like that!
    May 22nd, 2007 at 02:00am
  • Heartstrings.

    Heartstrings. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Singapore
    Well I have one question.
    In Chapter 8, it goes:Everyone laughs at Mikey’s display of affection for the smoothie shop, as Garry pulls into the parking lot.
    Who's Gar- Oh wait!
    Is it suppose to be Gerard?
    Wonderfully written.
    The way it all slows down during the scenes when Jade and Mikey are together really clinches it! Keep up the good work!

    XoXo
    Emmy
    May 21st, 2007 at 02:09pm
  • waitingforsomething

    waitingforsomething (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    Sweet! Loved the update, keep 'em coming!
    May 21st, 2007 at 05:22am
  • das nadine.

    das nadine. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Philippines
    i want a banana smoothie ! yay !

    nice one . :D     don't forget to edit and spell check though . ^^
    May 21st, 2007 at 04:54am
  • waitingforsomething

    waitingforsomething (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    XD Great updates! Glad he's going to get to know her first. That's always important. Mmmmmm... smoothies!
    May 21st, 2007 at 04:46am
  • das nadine.

    das nadine. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Philippines
    whoot . :D

    but how come mikey likes jade ? In Love

    pm me when you have more ?
    May 20th, 2007 at 03:35pm
  • S Chizzle x0

    S Chizzle x0 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    this is good :D
    i`ll read more tomorrow :]
    May 20th, 2007 at 04:45am
  • Heartstrings.

    Heartstrings. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Singapore
    Wow. That was a definite twist.
    This story seems to have impending disaster. I mean hat in a good way.
    I love reading dramatic stories!
    Yours was well written except you didn't capitalise Jade.
    keep up the good work!

    XoXo
    Emmy
    May 20th, 2007 at 02:59am
  • Heartstrings.

    Heartstrings. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Singapore
    Ooh.
    Chapter 5 was amazing.
    Frank really seems like a grown and mature man in the story.
    Really nice. Usually MCR fic centers around Gerard but this is different.
    I like its dramatic flair.
    Keep up the good work!

    XoXo
    Emmy
    May 19th, 2007 at 05:26am
Homepage › Stories › Her Escape › Comments