The Black parade - Comments

"Fuck you Virgil.." I said quietly.

"Mmm...yes, I get that alot! If I got a soul for everytime someone whom I've guided told me that, why...I'd be the ruler of hell now wouldn't I?"

XD That was good. Very funny, and an interesting chapter.

write more damit!! I'm waiting to longgggg!!!

grrrrrrrr UPDATEEE!!!!!

is there more to the story?? it seems unfinished...

or is there a sequel if it is finished?!

eep.... i want more....=(

omg.. i can't believe i only just found this! where have you been hiding my whole life?! why here of course...
this story is amazing!!! i love it so much!!! you're an amazing writer...

Oh.My.God!!!!!!! you should send this to MCR!!! The way you have like explored the album in so much detail.... its just incredible!! This is seriously amazingly written!! well done keep it up!!!

wow....
i can honestly say this is the most amazingly well-written story I have ever had the opportunity to read here on Mibba, or really anywhere, for that matter.

if my opinion counts for anything at all, i think you should definatley send this to a publisher. It would be an astounding short novel. i look forward to reading the next chapter in the epic story of "the patient."

I just read through all of it at once and.. well.. what can I say?

It's beautiful, just absolutely amazing.
You managed to capture and describe the Patients' whole being so well, I can almost feel it. It's fantastic. It's like it's everything it was ever meant to be.
Gerard would love to read this, I'm sure he would.

Please carry on writing, I would love to read more.

You updated! I just love how you keep tying in the lyrics to the chapters. I can't wait to see what the catch is with this last trial...

This is greeat=]
The way you described the emotions in the story and the music and uniforms.
How you incorporated the songs from the Black Parade and detailed everything so well. I'm subscribing for sure=]

P.S
Send it to Gerard...lol.

*jumps off of cliff...hanger*

I hate cliffhangers. I want more cool story!

Okay so I'm really tired and I really need to at least try and sleep, but I just stumbled across this and it looks absolutely intriguing so I'ma go subscribe now, read it when I have time and come back to you to let you know what I think, alright?

*yawn

Night night. =]

eeeeeeeee can't wait for more!!! start fucking writing!! grrrrr

ahhhhhhhhhhh its soooo good!!!!!!! I woulda never though of this i so subscibe you need to finish this!! man you are good!!!

Wow, this is actually amazing!!! Its like nothing I have ever read before. And it actually makes change from all the crappy teenie fics.

I'm really tried not to look at any of the other comments as I scrolled down to add my own because I've only read up to 'The Sharpest Lives'. I can sincerely say that this is one of the best thought out stories I've read on here. Makes me ponder chucking my meaningless romantic fanfic and having a go at something completely different.

Excellent.

*sadness* Your story makes me sad. Poor Patient dude; he's had a pretty crappy life, hasn't he?

Intense. Hmmm... was that included as part of his trials?

GAH!! cliffhanger!! why is his brother in hell? hmmm....
please update when you can!!
i absolutly love this story!

O.O why's his brother there? I love how original this is! Aaah, this is great. Keep updating it when you can, I'm loving it. *subscribes*