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  • horsie890

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    Again, I love how you've portrayed the characters. You've made great use of the lyrics; it makes total sense the way you're telling it.
    May 22nd, 2007 at 12:59am
  • Fallenfrombelow

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    those last two were really good, i loved the use of the lyrics!
    May 21st, 2007 at 01:24am
  • Johnny and June

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    geejus this is such a great story
    love how you fit in some of the lyrics they make sense too there not just there
    really good writing love it!!
    May 19th, 2007 at 03:40am
  • horsie890

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    Chapter 5: I don't know how there could be something like a deep soprano voice. They're opposites.

    But I love it. Sometimes when I'm reading it, it's hard to make myself slow down to catch all the details because I'm so used to hearing the song. This is a good thing. Trust me.
    May 19th, 2007 at 03:29am
  • Fallenfrombelow

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    like i said before, this is definintly one of the best stories i've ever read, i love how you incorporate the lyrics into your writing and how you protray the characters

    i loved the update!
    May 18th, 2007 at 05:19pm
  • AndTheCowSaidMoo

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    Where do I start?
    When I read your blog, I had no idea it would turn out like this! You managed to get everything in there from TBP; Lyrics, the theme, characters...Wow! Its simply amazing. I still cant believe how you managed to tie it all in. You are telling the fucking story as I think MCR wouldve intended , dude. Seriously, it was fucking awesome.
    Im done gushing. :D
    May 18th, 2007 at 10:58am
  • horsie890

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    I can't wait to see the city!

    ...

    Wow. I haven't left Story World yet.
    May 18th, 2007 at 08:55am
  • Fallenfrombelow

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    i really like this
    this is definintly one of the best stories i've read on here!
    May 18th, 2007 at 07:18am
  • horsie890

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    Wow. This is great. Nice use of the lyrics; I ended up having to skip Dead!, Disappear, and Sharpest, just because I couldn't get them to work. I like how you've portrayed the characters.
    May 18th, 2007 at 06:40am
  • horsie890

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    Awesome beginning. Love the descriptions. Puts my TBP fic to shame. SHAME, I TELL YOU!
    May 18th, 2007 at 06:26am
  • CyanideandHappiness

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    I've fallen in love....

    WITH YOUR STORY!!!
    May 18th, 2007 at 12:44am
  • The Update Eagle!

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    ^ Exactly.
    May 17th, 2007 at 07:28pm
  • CyanideandHappiness

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    You are amazing.
    I love this story.
    Continue with it.
    I want to read more.
    I am subscribing.
    =D
    May 17th, 2007 at 05:24am
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