Well,I wasn't expecting her dad to be okay with or that she was supposed to fall for Bill.... But it was amusing to read that chapter and I'm sad that its over now,but it was a cute ending. :]
GAHHH *falls off bed* OH MY GOD *seizures* THAT WAS AH-MAZINGGGGGG *smashes into wall* i hate it when fanfics end its like. i really got into the fanfic and its like, my life, then when it ends, your back in reality and your like..now what to do with my life. lmfaooo. thinking about a sequal?
No! Please don't end it! It is the thing I look forward too every day! Can you make a sequel or atleast another chapter that says what happens in the future? (i forgot what it is called.) Bitte!
OMG AMAZING (four(ty)) 2 thumbs up xD I LOVED IT from start to finish. From the seductive eye sex, to the bleached blonde barbie doll, to the waterfall, to the airport, to germany [and the cliff], to Jenkins stupidity, to [not so much] Derek, to her DUMPING derek, to her screaming I LOVE YOU to falling off the bed to the very most important part of one another!! AMAZING!!! i;m so going to copy and past every chapter and save it on my computer, and when i get my printer fixed im printing it out so i can read it over and over xD lol This one was by far my favorite :] i look very forward to now giving you insight on you other endevours [sp?] xD