What Happens Under The Sun - Comments

  • x Bailee

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    love love love love love it. hands down one of the best stories i've ever read.
    December 22nd, 2008 at 08:54pm
  • AshleyOutloud

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    YOU SHOULD TOTALLY DO A SEQUEL!
    Amazing ending.
    Love it, and I'll probably reread it just for the sake of all the sex and whatnot :)
    December 22nd, 2008 at 08:10pm
  • petalhee.

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    Fantastic ending! I can just see myself re-reading the whole story until you make another Tom Kaulitz fan fic. :)

    Conrgats!
    December 22nd, 2008 at 02:33pm
  • xXxLost_My_MindxXx

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    *cries* its... done... :(

    but it was well written and ended on a beautifl note! thank you soo much for writing this! <3
    December 22nd, 2008 at 09:39am
  • wirsindtraeumer.

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    :O
    Aww, I cant believe its over. I really did love reading this story.
    I'm not in to reading Tom fics much, but this is probably my favorite.
    :D
    December 22nd, 2008 at 07:07am
  • Hannahdoll

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    Well,I wasn't expecting her dad to be okay with or that she was supposed to fall for Bill....
    But it was amusing to read that chapter and I'm sad that its over now,but it was a cute ending.
    :]
    December 22nd, 2008 at 06:58am
  • Velvet Shadow

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    WOOO!!! I lvoed the last chapters! They were amazing!!
    December 22nd, 2008 at 06:25am
  • Author Anonymous

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    GAHHH *falls off bed* OH MY GOD *seizures* THAT WAS AH-MAZINGGGGGG *smashes into wall* i hate it when fanfics end its like. i really got into the fanfic and its like, my life, then when it ends, your back in reality and your like..now what to do with my life. lmfaooo. thinking about a sequal?
    December 22nd, 2008 at 06:19am
  • HarlequinKitten

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    Ahhh!! No, I don't want it to be overrrrrr. This story was amazing, one of my favorites!!
    December 22nd, 2008 at 06:04am
  • Derpina.

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    Wow, you blew me away. Congratulations. You're an awesome writer. This story is so well written.

    I enjoyed it immensley. Smiley
    December 22nd, 2008 at 05:17am
  • IchLiebeBillK

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    No! Please don't end it! It is the thing I look forward too every day! Can you make a sequel or atleast another chapter that says what happens in the future? (i forgot what it is called.) Bitte!
    December 22nd, 2008 at 05:05am
  • c.k.dexter-RAVEN

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    Awwwww
    I loved this story
    I'm sad it's over
    But it was great
    You should write another story about Tom ^-^
    That'd be awesome ^-^
    December 22nd, 2008 at 05:02am
  • Siro.

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
    December 22nd, 2008 at 04:32am
  • bellabelle

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    i loved it!
    you're amazing
    write another story! :P
    xx
    December 22nd, 2008 at 04:23am
  • JessaKay

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    OMG AMAZING
    (four(ty)) 2 thumbs up xD
    I LOVED IT from start to finish.
    From the seductive eye sex, to the bleached blonde barbie doll, to the waterfall, to the airport, to germany [and the cliff], to Jenkins stupidity, to [not so much] Derek, to her DUMPING derek, to her screaming I LOVE YOU to falling off the bed to the very most important part of one another!!
    AMAZING!!! i;m so going to copy and past every chapter and save it on my computer, and when i get my printer fixed im printing it out so i can read it over and over xD
    lol This one was by far my favorite :]
    i look very forward to now giving you insight on you other endevours [sp?] xD
    December 22nd, 2008 at 03:54am
  • Purple_Music94

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    OH MEIN GOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe she was suposed be with BILL....wow that dad of hers was a sneaky one ;)
    December 22nd, 2008 at 02:01am
  • JessaKay

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    LOL I SAW IT XD
    Haha Its my wonderful insight into everything xD
    I can't wait for the ending -screams-
    December 22nd, 2008 at 01:55am
  • petalhee.

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    I just finished reading chapter 71 and I just love what Kate's dad answer was when she asked who's good for her. Haha. Made me crack a smile. :]
    December 20th, 2008 at 04:08pm
  • xXxLost_My_MindxXx

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    only 2 more chapters!?!? *cries*

    good thing your new stoy is hellz good too, no? :)
    December 20th, 2008 at 07:28am
  • Author Anonymous

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    wait my comment didnt show up. FUCK. aoisjdioasjdjasodjsidjoasdasdoisdisd sequal afterz.
    December 20th, 2008 at 05:54am