Such a Beautiful Lie to Believe In - Comments

this is why you dont trust people so easily lolz btw please dont kill off Rev or any of her friends and also what do you think brian would do if she took pinkly hostage or something would he listen to her demands?

this is why you dont trust people so easily lolz btw please dont kill off Rev or any of her friends and also what do you think brian would do if she took pinkly hostage or something would he listen to her demands?

i like how interesting it makes the story but why did she get her friends involved u.u that's rule number 1 she just broke love how she made Shadows panic though that was exactly what i would have said xD

i love this story! do you think you could continue it!? PLEASE?

Awesome story!

This story is amazing! I love the whole plot and can't wait to see where it goes! More soon please? xx :)

ohh cant wait for the next one

yay and update!!! poor kathy, i hope she gets to a hospital, they wouldn't let her die...that's a joke, they probably would and take pictures for joie to see.

and will she get the chance to kill zacky? and what about rev, i thought he was helping her, or was that johnny?

more soon!!

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they are such jerks!!!!! if i were here i would've already gone crazy and killed myself. dang shes tough to handle all of that

poor girl
cant wait to see what happens!

Loved the new chapter can't wait for the next update XD

i knew that it was gonna be matt berry. wonder where he borrowed the kid from lol. and ouch, her poor teeth. did you really have to go there?

hmmm i wonder what punishment they'll make kathy do...

can't wait for more!!

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Mr. Freeze saves the day! ...sort of lol great story!! Keep up the good work!!

loved the update! i LOL-ed at the 20 questions part with kathy and zacky! haha i cant wait for more!

holy shit, intense chapter. so, zacky didn't just slash some random waiter :( poor alex.

and i wonder what's gonna happen with joie at the house.

can't wait for more!!

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loved the update!
hope Alex is okay!

oohhh cant wait to see what's going on!

yesssssssssss an update!!!!!! i was seriously so pumped haha.

i think kathy was the one who screamed because zacky was missing as was brian and zacky seemed to recognize her slightly.

more when you can please!!

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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH LOVE IT :) UPDATE SOON :)

I hope we get to see more of Brians jealousy :P it was cute

their plan definitely doesnt seem like it's gonna work but I cant wait to see what happens!