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  • TortureOfImagination

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    this is why you dont trust people so easily lolz btw please dont kill off Rev or any of her friends and also what do you think brian would do if she took pinkly hostage or something would he listen to her demands?
    November 17th, 2012 at 02:28am
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    this is why you dont trust people so easily lolz btw please dont kill off Rev or any of her friends and also what do you think brian would do if she took pinkly hostage or something would he listen to her demands?
    November 17th, 2012 at 02:28am
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    i like how interesting it makes the story but why did she get her friends involved u.u that's rule number 1 she just broke love how she made Shadows panic though that was exactly what i would have said xD
    November 17th, 2012 at 02:24am
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    i love this story! do you think you could continue it!? PLEASE?
    June 13th, 2011 at 09:37am
  • SynysterGatesIsMine

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    Awesome story!
    February 18th, 2011 at 05:08am
  • StruckByLightening

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    This story is amazing! I love the whole plot and can't wait to see where it goes! More soon please? xx :)
    April 27th, 2010 at 03:20pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    ohh cant wait for the next one
    March 29th, 2010 at 10:12pm
  • WaayTooObsessed

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    yay and update!!! poor kathy, i hope she gets to a hospital, they wouldn't let her die...that's a joke, they probably would and take pictures for joie to see.

    and will she get the chance to kill zacky? and what about rev, i thought he was helping her, or was that johnny?

    more soon!!

    <3
    March 29th, 2010 at 07:50pm
  • QueenProgrammer

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    they are such jerks!!!!! if i were here i would've already gone crazy and killed myself. dang shes tough to handle all of that
    January 28th, 2010 at 08:03pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    poor girl
    cant wait to see what happens!
    January 18th, 2010 at 04:47pm
  • jessica ...xxx

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    Loved the new chapter can't wait for the next update XD
    January 18th, 2010 at 08:19am
  • WaayTooObsessed

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    i knew that it was gonna be matt berry. wonder where he borrowed the kid from lol. and ouch, her poor teeth. did you really have to go there?

    hmmm i wonder what punishment they'll make kathy do...

    can't wait for more!!

    <3
    January 18th, 2010 at 07:41am
  • Klarque

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    Mr. Freeze saves the day! ...sort of lol great story!! Keep up the good work!!
    October 29th, 2009 at 09:35pm
  • SyntheticBeauty

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    loved the update! i LOL-ed at the 20 questions part with kathy and zacky! haha i cant wait for more!
    October 22nd, 2009 at 06:49am
  • WaayTooObsessed

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    holy shit, intense chapter. so, zacky didn't just slash some random waiter :( poor alex.

    and i wonder what's gonna happen with joie at the house.

    can't wait for more!!

    <3
    October 21st, 2009 at 05:49am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    loved the update!
    hope Alex is okay!
    October 21st, 2009 at 04:41am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    oohhh cant wait to see what's going on!
    September 30th, 2009 at 05:09am
  • WaayTooObsessed

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    yesssssssssss an update!!!!!! i was seriously so pumped haha.

    i think kathy was the one who screamed because zacky was missing as was brian and zacky seemed to recognize her slightly.

    more when you can please!!

    <3
    September 30th, 2009 at 03:37am
  • When_September_Ends

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH LOVE IT :) UPDATE SOON :)

    I hope we get to see more of Brians jealousy :P it was cute
    September 5th, 2009 at 12:48pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    their plan definitely doesnt seem like it's gonna work but I cant wait to see what happens!
    September 2nd, 2009 at 06:34pm
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