Such a Beautiful Lie to Believe In - Comments

Hmm well I dont think the guys' plan is going to work, doesnt seem like a very good one, but i wont know til the next update!

oh no, why does every plan have to be beaten?? wonder how she'll warn the governor without them knowing what she's up to.

can't wait for more!!

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I really enjoy reading this!
I love the plot and it's really well-written.
Can't wait for more!

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wonderfully awesome update!

I cant wait to see if she's gonna be able to get to the governor without A7X finding out!
loved the update!

dude the chapter didn't suck!! it was an important part in the plot!!!

now, i hope she's able to figure out some plan, but knowing the guys i'm sure that they'll be a few steps ahead of her. grrrr lol.

i'm glad you updated!!! can't wait for more!!

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i'm very happy her attempt at escape failed!

OI just have one question... And Johnny? Anyway... This story is AWESOME.

awesome update, loved that chapter!

duuuuude zacky's gonna be pissed when he wakes up lol.

and jimmy huh?? i don't think brian will keep it a secret, he has his own problems going on.

hahaha i love how joie was like "oopsie" when she had sex with him. like that could've been helped lol ;)

can't wait for more!!

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awesome movie!! i love it!! but the chapter was even better lol ;)

but how could you end it there??? grrrr. i hope that "the heart stopped beating" meant only for a moment because she was scared.

can't wait for more!!

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Oh man.
This is getting really good.
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omg! what's gonna happen???
see I'd answer your questions...but I'd be wrong...so I'll let you do that for me!...not the being wrong part...but the answering of the questions part...hahaha

Is she gonna die? well no, but still? that's a killer cliffhanger...lol no pun intended.

and there is the thing right there. He basically stated that he liked her (Syn). SO he's probably gonna fall in love with her while trying to get her to fall in love with him.

can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!
loooooved the update hun! Jimmy being sweet. that just about made my day! lol

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ahhh i hated that ending i need to know what is going to happen!!!

omg!!!
who has the knife up against her throat???
does jimmy have feelings for her?
will brian win her heart back???
STAY TUNEDDDDDDDDDDDD
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oh shit who is behind her with the knife i wish brian would not such a dick then maybe she would not mind being around him take it from jimmy who was nice to her and now they are not on too bad of terms update soon

at least Jimmy's being sweet to her
oh gosh, I want to know who found her!!

why oh why do you have to leave your chapters off at this points?!?! you are killing me here. who is behind her, probably either matt or brian. well anywho loved the update. and at least jimmy is being friendly

oh my johnny! I can't believe Brian flipped on her. I half expected him to protect her from them but definitely not attack her himself.

At least she's going to try to figure out some stuff about them.
it's funny when you think about it though because Brian would probably still be nice to her and she wouldn't have gotten stabbed and beaten if she had just stayed with Brian. He was falling for her anyways and not listening to him probably completely killed her chances. so I guess this is all her fault?...

loved the update.
update again soon please!!