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  • merance

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    Whoa.
    If Gerard hates his dad because of incest, when this story turns Waycest, he'll be eating his words. Shifty

    Hah, update sooner than usual, you... you... SMEGHEAD.

    Oh yeah, I went there.
    March 22nd, 2009 at 01:26am
  • Alice Verney

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    mikey didnt have to be an asshole
    March 21st, 2009 at 11:16pm
  • M451n

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    Poor Gerard. Can't Catch a Break anywhere.
    March 21st, 2009 at 06:45pm
  • myperfectsonnet

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    This story almost moves me to tears sometimes. It's so sad D:
    I love this story and it definitely deserves the 10 stars.
    It's really well written and emotional. Update it soon.
    March 21st, 2009 at 06:04pm
  • XrayPineapple

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    Wow, their dad completely lost it. not good, but good in the sense that they're free of him now.

    I love the Mikey/Frank thing, they is too cute, seriously. I love how Frank just decided to eat his fingers, why on earth?

    Update soon! Go on!
    March 7th, 2009 at 03:18pm
  • shine like millions.

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    Thank you very much. :mrgreen:
    I shall be updating this as soon as I can.
    February 28th, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • s u p e r h u m a n

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    I recently happened upon this story and can't help but be strangely intrigued.
    I love the way you describe certain things and the fact that it was in third person.
    I'll subscribe, just because it's that good. Try and update soon, yeah?
    February 28th, 2009 at 06:57am
  • The Conductor.

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    aww. but gerard needs to get his butt in gear.... hm. xD

    more soonish??
    February 19th, 2009 at 06:09pm
  • Alice Verney

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    cute update
    February 19th, 2009 at 03:53am
  • Alice Verney

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    cute update
    February 19th, 2009 at 03:45am
  • M451n

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    wow... Gerard doesn't really work at an art store, does he?
    February 19th, 2009 at 02:01am
  • merance

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    ^ ^ Agreeing with ol' Buffy, here.
    Talk to Gerard, Mikey!

    The Mikey / Frank thing that's going on is really sweet. I love how they kiss each other and stuff, just because they're best friends. :)
    And their dialogue is funny!

    I'm really glad their dad was put in jail, too! MY GOD, I WAS PRAYING FOR THAT.
    I wish he'd got longer than 2 years, though. T_T Don't hurt our boys!

    Great, as always! x
    February 19th, 2009 at 01:38am
  • Angelus.

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    At first I was surprised, but now I think it was a really good decision to skip forward 10 years =))
    Poor Gerard... Mikey should talk to him! *nods wisely*
    Can't wait for more =D
    February 19th, 2009 at 01:06am
  • shine like millions.

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    Umm... well it's Gerard who's eight, not Mikey.
    Mikey's always been four.
    February 8th, 2009 at 02:57pm
  • AwwxSugar

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    I've only read the first few chapters, but I'd like to know how MIkey went from being 8 years old, and then de-aged down to 4?
    February 8th, 2009 at 04:58am
  • whisperedsecrets

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    poor Gerard! it will be okay! you'll grow up and kick his ass! lol naw this was good tho. i really like it!
    January 31st, 2009 at 08:25am
  • XrayPineapple

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    O_o

    I can't believe you did that to ickle Gerard. Oh poor baby, I just want to wrap him up in a blanket and take him to feed the ducks. Poor kids.

    Though... scary Mr. Way, he licked his blood? What fetishes does he have? Actually, scrap that, do not want to know.

    I think Gerard should poison him.

    Or eat him.

    Sorry, read too much Thomas Harris recently, whoops.
    January 20th, 2009 at 07:55pm
  • merance

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    Why do you apologise for angsty updates?
    You know how I love them. Shifty

    He then leans in, his finger trailing through the little trickle of blood dripping down Gerard’s chin, he lifts his finger to his lips and gently sucks on it before standing up and smirking.
    Oooh, chilling.

    MY POOR BOYS.
    Yes, they are mine. :file:

    It also made me cringe when Mikey sat on Gerard's probably bruised stomach! Oh my God, I know you're like three but you're hurting your brother more, Mikey...

    DOOM ON YOU.
    DOOM ON YOU.
    DOOM ON YOU.

    :shifty
    January 18th, 2009 at 12:03pm
  • M451n

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    ohhhhhh myyyyy gooooooddd.
    January 17th, 2009 at 10:15pm
  • The Conductor.

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    IT"S SO SAD!

    please make it happier soon. but that chapter did need to happen. but OY i didn't want it too.
    you're a really good writer.
    more soon?
    xo
    January 17th, 2009 at 05:53pm