Tomato boy and his accomplices - Comments

The sight of the blood dripping down his arm made her feel sick, real sick
and for the first time she could remember she purged without wanting to,
the remain of her tiny lunch burning her throat as they came up and out
to spread all over the floor as she turned away from the boy.

I loved that part, it was good ..

And the earlier descriptions of her, what she was going through, that was awesome.

This story, I love the combination of the whole random, bizarre concepts/events
and the narrative that exists throughout.

More when you can :]

sweet, thanks heaps :)

ex dee
the inanimate objects ^^
that was a great technique :]

I like it too!
xD
It's very different.
Originality is awesome.
And you have lots of it. :D

...since sliced bread was invented..

^^ nice, mikki.

I like this story =]

_______________HE LIVES!

______________________________*smily face*

still awesome!

*Giggles*

Limited time offer .. :tehe:

At least, not the ones with either manners or parents with some source of torture implement, (such as a wooden spoon) or both- which is possibly most common.

*squee*
"Angry commuter".

Sounds familiar ... *glances at guy behind her*

Yay for inconsiderate corporate jack[asse]s.

Thanks :D
chadams story kinda inspired me...

wowza meesa likes it!

its different yet cool!

I love this.

Y'know, it sort of reminds me of something Melvin Burgess would write. Strange, but full of reality at the same time.

..The poor thing probably felt rejected..

..blood, bright tomato red..

..closing her eyes to block out the dirty words and dirty street..

*Shuts eyes and leans back*
I really like this story. The writing is mint stuff.

The someone threw the something at Tomato boy with a casual flick of his hand.

That was brilliant too.

The lack of structured plot and slash is refreshing.
It's a total break from my world.

Fourteen gold stars, Mikki. ^^

[er .. i only have 14 :oops: ]
:D

legaspth..
Hm, Juliet, aye?
*thoughtful look*

ripping her to shreds

That part was overall brilliant.

^^ can't wait for more ..

yay! new reader!!! -gives cookies-

this story is cool lol i like it =D

bye!

lol 'ts alright
*wiggles eyebrows*
Now, I must be off .. good luck .. :D

haha, i saw your journal, thanks :D

*gasp*
Oooh! I like Parakeet!
<as a character;; less as a person>
^_^

and yes..

*licks lips*

I'll try and create a following for you perhaps ;)