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  • r e v e n g e

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    haha, they taste good :p
    thanks, i'm gonna update now!!

    and make other people comment!!!
    May 19th, 2007 at 09:47am
  • charming.

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    Aw .. I loved the line,
    "..But she feared him too and only ever screamed at him."

    And the part with the ant ..

    I like this story, it looks at things in this slanted, surreal sort of way.
    You're a great writer, you know. Your sentences taste good.
    May 19th, 2007 at 06:59am
  • charming.

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    This story .. is .. really cool.

    I want more.
    Frequently.

    You want a better comment?
    Give me a fleshy fulfilling update.

    :D
    May 18th, 2007 at 01:16pm
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