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  • My-Chemical-Obession

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    yay more please...
    October 14th, 2009 at 10:14pm
  • Just A Broken Girl

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    Aww, that sucks for Mikey, hopefully he will adopt the baby. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! =] O.o
    October 14th, 2009 at 05:33am
  • rachemical

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    aaaw, poor Mikey. but lucky Gee he's with Frank, so no problem with that :D
    cant wait for more!
    October 13th, 2009 at 04:19pm
  • tokioschemicalparade

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    i really like the twist because its cute and it makes me warm
    October 13th, 2009 at 03:51pm
  • FluorescentChaos

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    So...the way bros are sterile? I must say, sooooo not the twist i was expecting, but nice nonetheless.
    October 13th, 2009 at 03:06am
  • inactive03

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    Well, it's a good thing that Gerard's gay. Oh my gosh. I just realized. If he does have that problem, then he just couldn't have been the dad!

    Aww, Mikey's so sweet. I hope the baby gets a good life.

    I loved the chapter <33
    October 13th, 2009 at 12:37am
  • inactive03

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    Hmm… if Frank and Gerard don’t adopt the baby, then who shall it be…?

    My guess is… nobody. It’ll be a stillbirth or something. Okay, well that’s just one guess. I have many more.
    Maybe Mikey will adopt it because he thought that Lyn-Z was pretty and he developed some weird fetish over her or something. Ooh! Maybe Bob or Ray will adopt it! Or maybe… hehe… Angelina Jolie and Brad Pitt will step in and care for the baby. Hehe.

    Lyn-Z’s having twins! No, triplets! Then everybody can have a baby! She’ll just like, pop them out and they’ll fly across the room and land in their new parent’s arms. XD

    That would be disturbing to see…^^ 0_o

    Maybe Ray is the father and the baby will come out sporting a fro. I was pretty much bald when I was born though, and I have a ‘fro’ now… it gets hard to brush out. -_-

    You must tell us the twist! Or I shall… I shall report this story to Gerard himself, yes. That would be goooood… *rubs hands together mischievously*
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    I told him the rest of the story of how it was band for the band.
    I think you meant "bad" =)
    October 11th, 2009 at 12:45am
  • sibyl vane.

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    ^ZOMG WHAT IF? :O

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    ...The suspense is obviously killing me xD
    October 10th, 2009 at 06:30pm
  • rachemical

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    OMG who will adopt that baby? is it Mikey and Alicia??
    Update sooooon!
    October 10th, 2009 at 04:12am
  • baysway

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    MIKEY!!!!!!!!!!!! I think Mikey will adopt the baby.
    October 10th, 2009 at 03:30am
  • disturbedlife

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    dun dun dun... who will it be...? At least its not Gee and Frankie! XD Aww I lovers them theys bes so cute together!

    Can't wait for more!
    October 9th, 2009 at 10:43pm
  • rachemical

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    aaargh, gee's way too nice to her!
    theres no way he'll adopt that baby.
    cant wait to read the next chapter! XD
    October 9th, 2009 at 07:18pm
  • sibyl vane.

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    Awww...I feel sorry for her :(

    But who is she to think that Gerard would fix her mistakes and adopt the baby for her? (Though I did get a lovely image of Frank and Gerard taking care of it...;D)

    I wonder who's adopting?
    October 9th, 2009 at 12:46am
  • inactive03

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    I's a gon' be sad when this story is over. ='(

    I would have felt so awkward if someone asked me to take a baby that I didn't want O.O
    I'm still curious as to what the next twist is! Dang it. I will be sure to check out your other story either today or tomorrow =D

    I really liked this chapter ^_^ Lyn-Z... kinda disappoints me though. She should just tell the truth and get it over with.
    October 8th, 2009 at 02:58am
  • rachemical

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    i get it now!
    Gee's so nice, it isnt his baby! (maybe)
    well cant wait for the next update and the new frerard story xD
    October 7th, 2009 at 05:06pm
  • inactive03

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    I have no clue as to what to expect, to be quite honest. -_-
    But whatever you have planned, it should be good. ^_^

    Sorry this comment is shitty. I have to get ready for school.

    I loved the update!

    Hehe, Frank's the girlfriend!
    October 7th, 2009 at 01:16pm
  • baysway

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    Loved the update!

    I am guessing that Gerard is the father of the baby and Lindsey knew it all along. She just lied and said it was not his so he would not feel obligated and to save face since he told the world he did not love her and did not want the baby.

    I find it absolutely ridiculous that Gerard would even consider flying to Jersey to be with her. He claims he doesn't like her but then he drops everything to go be with her when he thinks he is not even the father of the baby?!? Bizarre. It is all just very weird.

    Cannot wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 6th, 2009 at 06:44am
  • herpy berpy.

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    I'm guessing something either happens to Gerard, Frank or LynZ. But that's all of my theroy.
    October 6th, 2009 at 04:38am
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    If the baby is Frank's, I will punch you. Just kidding, but seriously… I don’t know what I’d do to you. I'm gonna start guessing what the twist is.
    Ooh, let me guess. There are twins, right, and one of them is a little mixed baby like me and the other is pale and white and that one is Gerard's because she got pregnant with one kid around the same time that she got pregnant with Gerard's. It isn’t very common, but it can happen. That’s just one theory.

    Theory number two: The baby turns out to be Mikey’s because he thought that she was so fine. It turns out that he cheated on his wife to do Lyn-Z, and now he must pay the consequences.

    Theory number three: Gerard flies back to wherever the hell she is (because I'm a bit too lazy to go back and look), and he meets up with her at the hospital. When he gets there, however, there's some odd booby trap waiting for him and he's captured and Lyn-Z takes him hostage. He finds out that she wasn’t ever pregnant and that makes him hate her, besides the fact that she's just captured him like a wild beast. Lyn-Z goes a bit insane and threatens Gerard and tries to kill him. Gerard manages to get his phone and call Frank while nobody is around and then Frank comes to the rescue.

    Theory number four: Lyn-Z dies during childbirth. A tragic loss? Eh, maybe if you liked her…

    I've run out of theories D: Darn.

    What Frank did was so incredibly sweet, even if he didn’t like Lyn-Z. It shows that he has a good heart and that he cares a lot about Gerard and his feelings. It’s so sweet.

    I couldn’t help but notice that you used the word starred instead of stared. I've never really noticed it before, but today I did.

    Anyways, I loved the update! =D
    <3
    October 6th, 2009 at 01:51am
  • sibyl vane.

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    ^Can't get out of the habit DDDDx
    October 5th, 2009 at 10:12pm