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  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    November 8th, 2009 at 05:22am
  • DyingRose

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    Please make the sequel!!!
    It'll be amazing!!!!!
    PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
    =P
    November 27th, 2008 at 08:34pm
  • CobwebsOfBloodlust

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    Please, please, please write a sequel =D
    You're an amazing writer, absolutely outstanding!
    Can't wait for the next update-- if there will be one!
    November 23rd, 2008 at 10:57pm
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    Anyone for tennis?

    Marvellous ending! I'd love to hear from Teddy! Go for it girl.
    November 22nd, 2008 at 11:04pm
  • kaleidoscope.

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    teddy is so freaking random.
    he barges in on random times...

    IT'S DONE?
    yes! sequel!
    November 22nd, 2008 at 04:46am
  • Princess.of.Night.

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    I like the idea of a sequel please continue :]
    November 20th, 2008 at 10:34pm
  • pagupagu

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    Brilliant chapter. Right shame Fabien died though. :(

    And I agree ith Fronkensteen, HOW CAN TEDDY EAT? He's crazed vampy.

    Can't wait for the sequel. (Y)

    xoxo
    November 20th, 2008 at 09:13pm
  • Fronkensteen

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    AAAH! THAT WAS THE END!
    *cries*
    It was so beautiful! (L) Btw, how come Teddy can eat stuff?
    November 20th, 2008 at 08:00pm
  • AngelOfBlood

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    I repeat from before... O_O_O_O_OOO_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O
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    You did not just end it there... oh hell no! it is so on....
    November 20th, 2008 at 07:56pm
  • Fin du Fromage

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    NOO!!!!!!! it's finished!!!!!
    WHY!!!!
    but there's a sequel so thats good!!! ^-^
    CAN'T WAIT!!!
    November 20th, 2008 at 04:51pm
  • Captain

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    *sigh* I loved it so much! Sad to see it end, but I hope you decide yes on the sequel. :D
    November 20th, 2008 at 06:04am
  • RainbowPIG

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    Oyea. And I agree with cherry_lip_gloss about the whole POV thing
    November 20th, 2008 at 04:54am
  • RainbowPIG

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    I ORDER YOU TO MAKE A SEQUEL, OR ELSE... I WILL...
    steal ALL of the cookies from your house!
    kekeke. :/ Now. You better obey
    November 20th, 2008 at 04:53am
  • flippinjeans

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    darn i wanted her to get shot
    lol i don't know why though
    November 20th, 2008 at 03:47am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I loved the updates and final chapter; it was beautiful. I think the sequel about Teddy would be awesome. I think it would be great to find out how he could taste food, and how he found 'Her' with the whole mind thing. I think that would be great. : ) Loved it anyways though.
    November 20th, 2008 at 03:40am
  • AllBecauseofYou

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    i love the idea please write more!!!
    November 20th, 2008 at 02:39am
  • cherry_lip_gloss

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    i kind of like it staying in danny's point of view.... but its your story, do what you gotta do!
    November 20th, 2008 at 02:13am
  • hockeyXgirlsXrock

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    LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the ENTIRE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! absoloutly amazing XD!!!!! though, im sorta sad fabian died....that sucks...but i still loved it XD!!! and i would adore a sequel :) and in teddys pov would be cool (though any sequel would rock XD)

    lol, ps, i loved this line "then all ran like hell out the door. I don’t know whether ‘hell’ can run or not, but that’s not really the point…" totally something i would say XD
    November 20th, 2008 at 12:52am
  • UpforDance

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    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL!!!!!!
    November 19th, 2008 at 11:38pm
  • MoonRose

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    I Love the idea for a sequel.
    I also loved your story.
    Your a really good writer keep up the amazing work.
    November 19th, 2008 at 11:26pm
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