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  • MyOnlyDesire

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    About the chapter with Krista the Mongoose [Not Ferrett], do you happen to know if the plural form of "mongoose" is "mongeese"? XD
    March 24th, 2009 at 03:58am
  • Your. Quick. Fixes.

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    That was the best ending ever! I'm sad it's gone it was so good though! =] Gonna go check out your Wentz story now =D
    March 13th, 2009 at 02:32am
  • BlueQueen535

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    Squee!
    My heart is all warm and fuzzy, as if it ate a kitten. =]
    March 8th, 2009 at 06:56am
  • Zombie.Fog!

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    There is a stupid amount of comments on this, Lauren. STUPID.

    I wish I was more original here, but I loved the whole thing. Especially that Krista the mongoose got a brief shout out. Fantastic.
    March 5th, 2009 at 09:07am
  • Laveau

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    So. Wow. I just read "Vegas Boys" and "Cancer" within a two day period. It had me hooked from the first chapter, and honestly that was one of the best stories I've ever read. :D
    March 5th, 2009 at 05:52am
  • hockeyXgirlsXrock

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    amazing. incredible. fantastic. superb. marvelous. wonderful. and a slew of other complements. seriously though, this story was amazing XD i loved every minute, i felt connected to the characters, and it was like i felt their emotions. which takes a good writer to do =) so ya, it was fantastic, and i loved it, im glad it ended up with kelsey and brendon together, they needed each other too much not to be =) and i loved the epilogue, it was adorable, especially brendon with the whole secret thing =P but ya, i loved it, keep up the stupendous writing.
    March 5th, 2009 at 04:09am
  • grain adloaf

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    This story was absolutely amazing. This and Vegas Boys are two of my favourite stories ever and some of the only ones I actually bother reading when the get updated!

    I will defintiely be reading the Pete Wentz story!

    Congrats on writing such an awesome story!
    March 4th, 2009 at 09:43pm
  • LoveTheLifeYouLive

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    The best epilogue I have ever read. Perfect. xD
    March 4th, 2009 at 09:06pm
  • See.

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    The engagement thing was adorable. xD
    I'm glad you tied up all the loose ends.
    I'm so sad it's over. x'( I'm going to go and subscribe to your Pete Wentz one, because you are an amazing writer. Hail

    And then I'll probably read Vegas Boys again. x)
    March 3rd, 2009 at 05:42pm
  • doesn'tbelieveinlove

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    you win. hands down. cancer and vegas boys are my favorite online stories. thank you for the perfect ending.
    March 3rd, 2009 at 03:08pm
  • Beautiful.Lies.

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    Vegas Boys and Cancer are two of my favorite stories on mibba =] [I will probably reread them soon lol]
    The epilogue was a perfect [official] ending :)
    March 3rd, 2009 at 02:02pm
  • sand.in.your.shoes

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    Awwww
    So sweet.
    <3 the engagement part, it was perfectly fitting for the story.
    So glad that this epilogue was here, not that the last chapter was bad, it just rounded everything off nicely =]
    thankyou for writing epic story =D
    March 3rd, 2009 at 10:02am
  • emmerpixie

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    Woweee :). That. was. so so so good :D
    March 3rd, 2009 at 09:07am
  • kara.christine

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhh. that damn near may be the sweetest thing i've ever read.
    :D
    March 3rd, 2009 at 08:29am
  • Glamophonic

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    awwww I loved it.
    March 3rd, 2009 at 04:03am
  • theorychicken

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    Awww it was so cute.
    However, I am sad that it is over. -sniffle-
    Can't wait to read the Pete Wentz story. :P
    March 3rd, 2009 at 02:50am
  • brndwnthedisco

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    I read both Vegas Boys and Cancer in two days. I love them both to bits! I cannot wait for an epilouge! Please hurry!
    March 1st, 2009 at 10:10am
  • dreamcatcher;

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    Thank you so much for that beautful story
    It really was absolutely amazing and I LOVE it!
    Beautiful ending too In Love
    February 23rd, 2009 at 05:45am
  • panicfan3-10

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    oh my gosh.
    that was beautiful!
    I just feel like an idiot for not checking for the sequel sooner....
    bravo though, im completely amazed!
    February 22nd, 2009 at 02:16pm
  • im his underdog

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    this was my favorite story on here !!! imloved it kinda sad its over): but happy there together (:
    February 22nd, 2009 at 01:09am