The Boys of Summer - Comments

Aw, thank you.

It was really good, and even my friends (who are currently reading over my shoulder) liked it. They said they liked the imagery and such and 'if you had written White Fang, then they wouldn't mind reading it so much.' (We're reading it in school.)

Wow that was fantastic, you're just...gah you know i love how you write, the imagery the feeling soaked into every word..

It didn't think it was a frerard (as i saw you'd written a new story and pounced on it without looking) but completely thought you were writing about our favourite and least favourite couple when i read it. (i now know you were).

, i'd say continue it because i'm greedy but i think it sits perfectly as a one-shot :D

The italics were brilliant. They kind of tied the story together.

Your description brings the scenes to life, and sort of draws the reader in and sucks him/her into the universe you've created. The emotion you wrap in your words seems almost poetic, and very, very beautiful. :)

You have a gift, and you use it well. Thank you for sharing it with us.

So many positive comments!
I love you guys, thank you loads.

oh wow...that was beautiful and leaves me wanting more....
blerg.
i love stories like this.
<3

Oh My God.
That was Beautiful. It was full of passion.
Your one talented writer!
GAH! I hope you have other stories!
*runs off to look*

EDIT:

*faceplam*
Of course you do, I'm reading two of them!

Oh fuck.....I can't believe I'm fucking crying at a oneshot....*sniffle* Please don't continue it, cuz then I'd have to read it and it would make me cry again......:cry:

I love the one shot. One of the best written ones I have ever read. It is really really really good. Lol there is no words to explain it.
XoXo,
Steph

This was so beautiful. You really have a lot of talent. The emotions were wonderful and the imagery, everything was perfect. It really is great as a oneshot, I think it adds to the feel of the story. I don't know how much sense it would make to have him talking about how something is over, and then have it continue. So... amazing job!!
xoxo

that was bloody phreeking beautiful! i phreeking love it!

that was so beautiful.
wow
just... wow.
too bad it's just a one-shot.
it was really kick ass though

Bury_Our_friends:

omg thats so awesome
beautiful
great, perfect one shot
it sould be a 2 part thing tho
but its ur choice and either way its aweome

I agree :]]

That was amazing!
You have a lot of talent.
I wish I could write something like that!

x

omg thats so awesome
beautiful
great, perfect one shot
it sould be a 2 part thing tho
but its ur choice and either way its aweome