Mantra of Lies - Comments

Oh PLEASE tell me that you're going to update this sometime soon!
You've got me on tender hooks here!
Please update again!
Poor Billie :'(
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Man, you havn't updated in FOREVER! I want 2 kno wats happenin to Billie Please!!!Update:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(

For someone as famous as Billie Joe, signing his name should be as easy as breathing.
I loved that detail. It fit so perfectly... the horror of him and Adrienne made everything else seem too easy. Nice thought.
I also like the flashback... and when Billie said that the ring was beauitful, but not as beautiful as the hand it was on.
Lovely.

I love everything about this- the sudden emptiness.
You have so many details worth mentioning, but then I'd be copying and pasting most of the story. The words you put intbetween the dialogue really makes what they say mean so much more.
I think just the words you write are perfect.

Way to make me get addicted to your story.

And goddamn..Cliffhanger! :grr:

..I got a little teary in the first chapter..maybe because I had "Are We The Waiting" playing in the background...

Are you gonna keep writing???

PLEASE DO!!!

You're an incredible writer, and I already love this story!!
Hope yah get more up soon

this is an awesome story!

i love how its like your there! =]

more soon?

Please please PLEASE x 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 write some more on this. I'm hooked. I'm goddamn hooked.

This is an awsome story...PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER

Oh my god... You are an amazing writer and this is great story so far. After only two chapters I love it.
Although points of it made me want to cry...
Anyway, PLEASE write more soon!

in desperate need for more of your writing please!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD MORE P L E A S E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a really good story. Can you please update! This story is great! Please. Please. Please. Please.

add more!!!!

ooooooooooo plez add more soon

that was good. I hope Billie's ok

Oh man.

Chapter two is like...mesmerizing.

Especially the flashback, when he was telling Mike that he was going to propose to Adrienne...that was terrific.

awwwwwwww plez let billie b ok, plez add more

I'm so glad you continued this. It deserved to be!

And man, I DID not see that ending coming. My jaw literally dropped and my heart thudded beneath my chest... what's gonna friggin' happen??!!??

Okay, so paranoia out of the way...

Billie Joe needed him more than Tre needed himself. Mike had filled him in on their “conversation” on the phone. Tre had flown back to Oakland before you could blink.

I love the dedication, the loyalty this line exuded.

Adrienne was still his angel, but the marriage was over.

That was such a poetic, sad way to say it. Really.

So, it might sound overused, but I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm one of this story's biggest fans, so... yeah, I wanna know what happens!!! :mrgreen:

Review:

Personally, I don't normally read GD stories.
I'm not a big fan.
But this one really interested me and made me want to read on.
The description is beautifully written and the dialogue isn't boring or repetative like many stories are.
Overall I really like it.
Very well written.