Mantra of Lies - Comments

  • Cello.

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    Holy. Crap. That was amazing. See, this is why I like it when you comment my stories....you write so damn well...I want to see an update or I swear I will go insane. Incredible. Man I hope Billie's okay...
    May 29th, 2007 at 08:53pm
  • Vampire_Vogue

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    ZOMG!!! Yes, Mike! Call the fucking ambulence!! =( Great update, must pm me with more!! ^^
    I also have a Green Day story, about Green Day in high school. Check it out, I think you might like it, since you like them as much as me! =)
    Morgz xx
    May 29th, 2007 at 04:03pm
  • The Sweet Rebellion

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    Great written keep on doing the good work. =)
    May 28th, 2007 at 07:36pm
  • Vampire_Vogue

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    Dude (Well, dudette actually, but w/e) This is freaking awesome!! It's the best oneshot I've read, and the best one shots nearly always become stories! Or at least they should. Write more! =)
    Morgz xx
    May 28th, 2007 at 06:28pm
  • folie a dru.

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    I found this to be extremely refreshing from the junk that gets posted on here all the time. There were a few patches of, I don't know what, that sort of... seemed slightly off from the rest of the tone. Obviously, I can't point out what so it's nothing extreme.

    The subject matter has been done numerous times, but you brought out some very new things in it. For instance, the mentions of Billie's dad seemed so raw and fraught [sp?] with emotion.

    My favorite line, hands down: Fuck passive persuasion.
    May 25th, 2007 at 10:25pm
  • Bucky Barnes

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    Wow that was cool
    Very well written
    May 25th, 2007 at 06:55pm
  • billie.

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    I liked it.
    Very much so.
    Very well written and the ending was good.
    May 25th, 2007 at 05:54am
  • Syd Barrett.

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    Dude, this is cool! Poor Billie, man...especially Wake Me Up When September Ends and all that...seriously, you have GOT to continue with this. It's really good.
    May 25th, 2007 at 04:18am
  • dr. faustus

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    Wow...Girl I loved this. The second best Green Day story I ever read. Your such a great writter. I loved how everything was in depth. Wow just Wow. Do you think you could read one of mine and tell me what you think. Please.
    May 24th, 2007 at 03:57am
  • peacemaker.

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    I'd love if you continued with it! :) You're an awesome writer.
    May 23rd, 2007 at 05:50pm
  • strychnine twitch.

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    Aww wow... this is brilliant. I love this... i hope you do update it 'cause it'd be good to see what happens and if Billie turns out okay and stuff...

    I'll subsicribe incase you do:)
    May 22nd, 2007 at 10:59pm
  • VAMPIRExIERO

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    o plez add more it is really good but i want more
    May 22nd, 2007 at 04:53pm
  • The Way

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    I actually really love it. First Green Day story I've read that wasn't required on the Story/Review thread, and I absolutely loved it.

    I mean, what's not to love? You'd probably want me to say what particular stuff I liked, but I liked the whole package. Truly, I did. I mean, Mike and Tre being concerned, and BJ being stubborn about his obvious problem, and when you brought up the family issues, it just got so emotional, you know?

    I love this. I'm gonna subscribe because 1) I'd like to read it again, 2) It deserves to be updated. I mean, really. Please. Don't leave us hanging like that.

    Thank you. A great story you've got there. :D
    May 22nd, 2007 at 02:38pm
  • Frankie007

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    That was really, kool, could ya plz write another chapter?!
    But 4 the record i'm all 4 Billie and Adie (Although I don't no them!)
    May 22nd, 2007 at 09:52am
  • VAMPIRExIERO

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    i like it it made me sad, i hope billie never does that, but nice story
    May 21st, 2007 at 10:40pm
  • Cello.

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    I don't know why anyone hasn't commented on this yet! I really loved it, it's one of the best one-shots I've read in a long time. My favorite part was the whole "Andy Armstrong" because (this is sort of sick, but whatever) my favorite fanfictions are always the ones that involve Billie's father somehow...anyway keep up the good work! I would really like to see more writing from you...=]
    May 21st, 2007 at 10:36pm