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  • jediknightjasmin

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    I don't see why he could have possibly stood her up.
    I thought he liked her!
    I lvoed this story, anyway!
    It was incredibly cute!!
    I think it went by too fast for me, though!
    D;
    But that doesn't make it any less AWESOME!
    Patrick<333333
    I'm gonna go read the first three chapters of the sequel now (:
    July 20th, 2009 at 04:46am
  • hang you up.

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    :O

    What happened to Patrick? o_O

    Sequel time, por favor. :D
    May 5th, 2009 at 04:51am
  • LakeEffectKid

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    Well, now we know why Jess didn't want to see Patrick, in the sequel.

    Yay, my name! This is like my Birthday present, thank you, even if this wasn't my present, it is still an update.... sequel, yay!
    May 5th, 2009 at 04:22am
  • talking-bird.

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    OH NO HE DIDNT!
    May 5th, 2009 at 03:42am
  • goodnight-socialite

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    holy. CRAP.

    damn that beautiful and insanely talented evil stump man!

    ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

    quick! start the sequel (which btw, looks AMAZING). but quick, do it!

    gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, L, you fiendish writer. you fiendish fiendish awesome super duper writer! arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    i think i need to go lie down.
    May 4th, 2009 at 07:01pm
  • Rian Dawson

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    -glares- Patrick, you whore!

    I know it'll probably end up being something that was absolutely unavoidable, and I'll apologize later if that's the case.

    But as of right now?

    Patrick, you whore!
    May 4th, 2009 at 06:50pm
  • heartbreakisforever

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    I can't believe he stood her up? Something must've happened why he couldn't make it. Damn, you got me looking forward to the sequel even more than I did before! Oh, and it was my pleasure reading and commenting! I absolutely loved this story.
    xox
    May 4th, 2009 at 05:07pm
  • Rian Dawson

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    ...prom. I can't get away from the stupid thing. -_-'

    But aww. A date. =]

    ((Ignore my bitterness.))
    April 25th, 2009 at 04:45am
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    Aw, Prom! Now this reminds me of the first Patrick fanfic I ever read.
    God, your signature killed me!
    April 17th, 2009 at 04:40pm
  • heartbreakisforever

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    Patrick being all nervous and stuff was so cute :). Yay for going to prom with him, lol.
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    xox
    April 17th, 2009 at 12:48pm
  • LakeEffectKid

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    Aw, Prom! Now this reminds me of the first Patrick fanfic I ever read.
    April 17th, 2009 at 03:35am
  • hang you up.

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    Oh my. Prom. =D

    And music.

    This story makes me happy.
    April 17th, 2009 at 01:29am
  • talking-bird.

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    AWWWW!
    :D
    April 16th, 2009 at 08:39pm
  • goodnight-socialite

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    ok, call me overemotional, but i think i'm gonna cry!

    I WANNA GO TO PROM WITH PATRICKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

    that update was adorable...ohhhhhhhh, to know patrick in high school XD
    April 16th, 2009 at 08:16pm
  • Rian Dawson

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    Only three or four more? -pouts-

    But yay sequel!
    March 25th, 2009 at 02:23pm
  • hang you up.

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    Mooooooosic. =D

    Aw. It's almost over.
    But yay for sequels.
    March 24th, 2009 at 05:43am
  • LakeEffectKid

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    Whoo! Update! Boo hoo, one of the last chatpers..... but whoo again 'cause there's a sequel! BTW, I love your avatar!
    March 24th, 2009 at 04:40am
  • goodnight-socialite

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    i love this story so much, i'm gonna make up a poem, yep...

    lola, this story is amazing
    this story should have ten stars
    i could read this story a million times over
    and it would still be...(something that rhymes with stars)

    yup, see? i'm the greatest undiscovered poet everrr. XD

    anyways, my stupidity aside, this is bloody brilliant, and patrick is the cutest man in the history of the world. indeed he is. :D
    March 23rd, 2009 at 09:26pm
  • heartbreakisforever

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    And after commenting the sequel-summary, I'm gonna comment on this one, hehe.
    I absolutely loved the chapter. I love how Jess feels safe around Patrick and that she trusts him enough to tell him about her dad. Very well written chapter hun, and I'm looking forward to the next one!
    xox

    btw, it's great you got the Bden-Pete story planned out :D.
    March 23rd, 2009 at 08:55pm
  • Sister Strange

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    There are not enough Patrick Stump stories for my liking.

    This will keep me happy for a little while though.<3 Great story hun.
    March 3rd, 2009 at 05:44am