I don't see why he could have possibly stood her up. I thought he liked her! I lvoed this story, anyway! It was incredibly cute!! I think it went by too fast for me, though! D; But that doesn't make it any less AWESOME! Patrick<333333 I'm gonna go read the first three chapters of the sequel now (:
I can't believe he stood her up? Something must've happened why he couldn't make it. Damn, you got me looking forward to the sequel even more than I did before! Oh, and it was my pleasure reading and commenting! I absolutely loved this story. xox
i love this story so much, i'm gonna make up a poem, yep...
lola, this story is amazing this story should have ten stars i could read this story a million times over and it would still be...(something that rhymes with stars)
yup, see? i'm the greatest undiscovered poet everrr. XD
anyways, my stupidity aside, this is bloody brilliant, and patrick is the cutest man in the history of the world. indeed he is. :D
And after commenting the sequel-summary, I'm gonna comment on this one, hehe. I absolutely loved the chapter. I love how Jess feels safe around Patrick and that she trusts him enough to tell him about her dad. Very well written chapter hun, and I'm looking forward to the next one! xox
btw, it's great you got the Bden-Pete story planned out :D.
I thought he liked her!
I lvoed this story, anyway!
It was incredibly cute!!
I think it went by too fast for me, though!
D;
But that doesn't make it any less AWESOME!
Patrick<333333
I'm gonna go read the first three chapters of the sequel now (: