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  • Rhea

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    I like it. It's very well written and leaves me wondering. ^_^
    November 28th, 2008 at 09:56pm
  • redvelvetorangecrush

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    i love the story!! so sad to hear about her father.
    update more please!!!
    November 20th, 2008 at 06:07pm
  • kt-Scissorhands

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    awww..poor dears...
    November 20th, 2008 at 01:47am
  • hang you up.

    hang you up. (150)

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    ^ I concur. ^^

    I like this so far! Moresoon whenever?
    November 18th, 2008 at 03:24am
  • i defy you stars.

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    I love Patrick stories... In Love
    November 17th, 2008 at 08:31pm
  • goodnight-socialite

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    i love this story!!!

    it's so well written!! what happens next?! patrick's already adorable, and he's hardly been in it!! that was sad about her dad though...aarghh!

    more soon L!!
    November 17th, 2008 at 08:17pm
  • Skiba

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    Awww :(
    I liked the beginning a lot. Good message you're trying to put across!
    Looking forward to another update! x
    November 17th, 2008 at 08:05pm
  • kt-Scissorhands

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    yes me likey, continue please! Smiley
    November 15th, 2008 at 11:13pm
  • Viva La Eh-Mii

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    I really like it already ^.^

    But the writing's a bit hard to read... (sorry to be the first person to say something bad =S)

    =D
    November 15th, 2008 at 01:43pm
  • hang you up.

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    ^ Ditto. A little more would be nice, but I like it. ^.^

    -suscribes-
    October 26th, 2008 at 03:10am
  • Rachelish

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    I like it! I would have liked some more in the prolouge but it was still enough!

    Im a detail person ;)
    October 25th, 2008 at 03:23pm
  • Skiba

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    This sounds awesome :]
    I'm definately going to subscribe! x
    October 24th, 2008 at 07:24pm
  • heartbreakisforever

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    I agree with all that's been said above :). Sounds like this is going to be a great story! Thanks for telling me you started this.
    *subscribes*
    xox
    October 24th, 2008 at 04:22pm
  • talking-bird.

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    ooh, i like this already. :)
    October 24th, 2008 at 04:00pm
  • Hanna

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    :D
    October 23rd, 2008 at 06:10pm
  • goodnight-socialite

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    omigod!! i love it already!!!

    what's going to happen?!?!?!?!

    arghh!! the suspense!!!

    and patrick is already the most adorable guy ever!!!

    XD
    October 23rd, 2008 at 06:08pm
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