Invisible - Comments

wooo! go girl!!! and yay she's got patrick with her now...

Wow, this is good. Very detailed, and it has Patrick Stump in it. I really like, it's not like other drab to fab kinda things, it's not cliche, well not enough that it's bad, it's still good and nothing has gone to her head, yet, hopefully. Updates are awesome.

this is so good you need to update soon!!!
*subcribes*

_Boo_

sooooo liking the story mahnnnnnnnn

the eagle (i mean patrick) has landed!

sorry, that was random...anyway...

AWESOME UPDATE!!!

i love patrick...he is, of course, the best fob member, and is, tbh, quite lucky to have this beautiful story written about him *nods* XDD

wooo!! yay for jess!!

short but sweet, and very very awesome!! XDD

AWESOME once again i love this story just like i loved your last one keep up the good work can't wait for more.

xoxo aj

aww...!!!! i thought it was so cute that they want her as a model!!!! :

DKNY? Wow.

And I still commentify. You deserve it for posting something to keep the story going.

This isn't a bribe to bring Patrick back. XD

j'adore ca! (is that even right?)

anyways, i love it, i do!!! you're an amazing writer! XDD

awww....:tehe: i kinda know that feeling, it's weird. My auntforcedtook me to a beauty salon and got a lady to do this facial treatment thing, did my makeup, got my hairdone, manicure and pedicure (for the first time ever) and then took me shopping at a cool slothes place....i was going what the heck? at the mirror cuz the clothes looked good on me and my face looked pretty. 0_o now everytime I get really negative about how I look i just think about that (even though I still can't do makeup/hair like that)

Awesome story!
I can't wait to hear moreeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xD

That's the dress that i want for my prom this year. It's so pretty!
I'm glad she didn't find the makeover that bad so far. i would hate to be put in that position.
x

I love the dress.

And the flashback was really nice.

...But where's Patrick? o.0 [/lame]

i loved it!! i want to get a makeover now, lol.

it was so sad with her dad though, you described it really well, the flashback was cute.

keep updating!! if not, you'll have me to answer to! hah

p.s. GORGEOUS DRESS. i need it.

Modeling? Hm...

Thank you Emma, for causing an update!

...More soon?

hmm..modeling....could be fun i suppose......i was asked to model for a store once...:XD but that was while i was trying on dresses (that i could never afford) and once ichanged back into my ripped jeans, old,ripped, dirty converse, H.I.M. shirt with the heartagram they seemed to have forgotten me...:roll:
:tehe: but i'm with her, i hate taking pics....

Awesome. I can't wait to see what happens :]
x

ooo modeling. that should be fun. can't wait to see how that ends up.

more soon please :)

dedicated to lil ol' me? aww shucks, lol

awesome update lola, i can't wait to see what happens at this model thing!!

more soon? xxx