that was from zero inspiration?! Jeez!! It was a really good chapter! And, it showed a lot about Zacky... and explained why he doesn't live Marnie and George anymore. I really hope that she does still love him...'cos won't she eventually as a vampire love him? Please? more soon??
Omg...I have a horrible feeling that she'll hate him loads and loads and then once he's basically died she'll realise what she's missing and there'll be another trip down to hell. I'm really frightened for him. And I love your portrayal of the Devil :D:D More soon??
okay so for the last five hours I have been reading the prequel to this story and just when I thought I couldn like it anymore than I did, here is the sequel. You are quite the fantastic writer.
What the fuck is he up to? He's not seriously going to the Devil to ask him to save Ebony is he? There could be all kinds of horrible things attached to that deal!! Zack might have to give his immortality for her life / immortality - and then where would they be?! Fucking no where again. I don't think Ebony would like that kind of deal. I only hope Zack isn't being rash and hasn't thought this through. He's such a sad creature when he can't have his Ebony!! It seriously breaks my heart! More soon??