She cannot die! That is not allowed. That would also be a very short sequel and who would want that? That being said, I really liked his dream, very sweet until she disappeared...you set it up very well.
i decided to do as you asked. I' being decent and commenting. So, because i chose to be decent and comment, i ask that you be decent and NOT wait 6 years to update. now, to the actual comment.
OMG! EBONY! you cant kill her off! and dont tell me your making the whole story about him trying to save her. shes not allowed to die, i will hurt you if she does.
*bursts into tears* OMG!! She can't die!! What the fuck is she doing that for? She was so happy with Zacky! They were so the perfect pair and she can't just not love him anymore!! *wails manically* Please, please, please, can this be happy?? I have a horrible feeling that Zacky's going to be in hideous pain and feel like he's being burnt alive if she does die. What's he going to do without her? Kill himself and hope they end up in the same place to truly be together forever? More soon??
You don't love us!! *cries hysterically* why no update?? I check this story religiously every day...and you know the day you update will be the day that I knock myself out with excitement, right? Please do update!! It's such an awesome story, and everyone who's commented is waiting on tenterhooks for more...*hint hint*