Under Darkness - Comments

Hehe thanx for the update!!

Hahaha bird crapped on Danni!! I really like Danni...
Jake needs to BACK OFF!!!!!

Oh The DRAMA!

Nice, it was cool, I liked it.

yay update!!
she does not need Jacob, I think she'll find real love. I hope she does.
maybe jake does love her in his own twisted way.... Ugh I don't know whose side to choose!!

Good job!

Eck! Double sorry. Mibba crashed on me. =[

very original. =]
I likey!
I would love to find out more what happens.

However (I'm so sorry!) there were a few grammar mistakes. Like not captalising I and stuff. I'm so sorry - I only brought it up because it bugs me when I don't see that, but appart from that, I love your writing. =]

Keep on going (y)
Again, sorry for the slightly negative comment.

This stpry is so wicked awesome please continue it :p

Yes!!! Awesome! I love it!!!!!!

hello!!



i just read the first chapter and so far i really like it. i think it is a very original idea.
keep it up.
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