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MagicMan (100)

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Well written, nice staging of the scene and POV separation. I like the story so far. Catches early and moves at the right pace. Well done.
Smiles
Bob

October 29th, 2008 at 09:10am

Middleman. (150)

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I like it and its well written. good work.=]

October 25th, 2008 at 01:57am

Mr.Sunshine (100)

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Frankie007:
Hey. I like the way you write. :)

Can't wait for more.

OH NO YOU DIDN"T
You stole my idea I thought of this the other day the whole vampire thing.
You got it first I guess, and theres nothing making my vampire story.. which will own yours, not really.
Yours is heaps good, I may steal stuff from yours when I write mine which wont be for a while now so you can get a good head start. but you better keep reading my story lol.
cant wait for the next chapters. xoxo Trevor.

October 24th, 2008 at 09:39am

Frankie007 (100)

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Hey. I like the way you write. :)

Can't wait for more.

October 24th, 2008 at 08:10am

hello seattle; (100)

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OME! AMAZING! I love it <3 I can't wait to see moreee [[[[[:

October 24th, 2008 at 07:44am

Dr. Jekyll (100)

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This is pretty interesting
Keep up the good work
:)

October 24th, 2008 at 07:43am