How Embarrassing Are My Chemical Romance

This is mostly from a girl, Jessica's, point of view. This is not a clique. Her dad Bob Bryar makes her agree to go on tour with him and the rest of his band, My Chemical Romance. This is a Whatever-I-Think-Of-That-Sounds-Good I will put into the story. So I basically I don't even know where this is going.
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. If you see any mistakes whilst reading commenting me and telling me about it would be great.

Thankyou.

The all famous Disclaimer: I own My Chemical Romance and the band members Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Ray Toro and Mikey Way. I also own The Used and the band members Dan Whitesides, Bert McCracken, Jepha Howard and Quinn Allman. I own the main character Jessica, she is my own creation. I again also own any other character and/or band that will be featured in this story.
  1. [001] The Start.
    My Chemical Romance is Australian.
  2. [002]
    I will always know what is happening around me dead, alive, awake or unafraid.
  3. The 3rd Bit.
    AND THE HOME TOWN OF MCR ARE NEW SOUTH WHALES.SORRY PPL.
  4. The Bit after the bit before this.
    AHH WHAT IS HAPPENING!!!
  5. The 5th Bit.
    I SLEEP WITH SHOES ON!!!
  6. Now it"s the 6th Bit.
    KINKY YOUNG GIRLS
  7. The Bit After the Bit before this..=]
  8. Yeah i do like Jaffas
    ahahahahahahhaaNO!
  9. I DON"T KNOW...
    READ IT>>>JUST READ<<<<<