Without You Is How I Disappear

There is a girl. She's not special, she's just herself. On a party, she meets a boy. Yeah, this boy is special for her. And he makes her feel special. And she loves him, and he loves her to.

This story isn't ready yet, but with some patience I will soon get ready. I'm such a beginner in english, so please don't pick on me because of that. Love critique.