Status: I'd love any adivce, since this is the first story I'm actually proud of c:

Songbird

Elijah has started to grow distant and cold ever since his closest friend Sage has left him. Elijah eventually opens up and makes new friends. When Sage returns back to his old town for a visit Elijah starts to feel anger and jealousy because of the new friends Sage has made while he was gone. Although Sage is truly sorry for upsetting Elijah, Elijah still seems to despise him. He soon realizes why you should forgive others....