In my opinion, there's nothing wrong in her writing skills.Bella ,maybe,is not suprised to know Edward is a vampire 'cause she ,maybe, believes into some things 'normal' people would call weird.See how she easily figure out who Jacob is.And to the loud truck thing, as far as i know,that truck is given to her by her dad and it's not her choice of car.This all is just my opinion.
September 21st, 2009 at 07:35am