Honestly, I think this article is a little biased. I'm not a fan of Never Shout Never, but I don't necessarily think he's a sellout. While I like that at the end you try to let the reader form their own opinion, that "you should just enjoy the music he's given you" bit is extremely off-putting, and makes me feel like you're trying to sway me into no believing he’s a sellout, which if I did, would be my right to believe.
I just think you could have made it a little less biased, and as the previous comment states, there were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but you had the basis for something good.
Take this all constructively, and I have no doubt that your future articles will be great!
I just think you could have made it a little less biased, and as the previous comment states, there were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but you had the basis for something good.
Take this all constructively, and I have no doubt that your future articles will be great!