What's Wrong With Me || Good Original Stories? - Comments

  • muse.

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    You sound a lot like my best friend. So after all she's done, I can't really give her (or you) any advice because I've never experienced anything in my life like that. Hell, I've never had a boyfriend or even been kissed. All I can really do is lend an ear and a shoulder to cry on as she vents her frustration. I'm sorry I couldn't help.

    Quarantine the Cannibals. A good friend of mine on the internet has a knack for writing. This is a good original, in my opinion.
    January 4th, 2013 at 08:54pm
  • The Zac

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    @ Crimson Desire
    Well confused or not you should have been straight forward about it. And Beta's as in not Alphas. Alpha males in nature are the dominant and strong ones. Betas are not. People use it more socially to describe wussy guys. Not very manly or confident. I could go on and on, but I won't.
    January 4th, 2013 at 12:07pm
  • Scarlet Fields

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    @ The Zac
    I know I'm a bitch- I feel horrible about that- but I was confused and it was the first time that's ever happened. i did't know what to do.
    Sorry, but what do you mean they're "betas?" Also they haven't flat out told me they're into me.
    January 3rd, 2013 at 11:08pm
  • The Zac

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    Well Bob's obvioulsy pissed that you fucked him around. Don't act like you're interested if you're not.

    Jim and Mike both seem like total betas.

    You're not doing the right thing. This whole avoidance thing is dumb. If you're not into them, fuckin' tell them.
    January 3rd, 2013 at 12:32pm
  • Jordypye

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    I have links to my stories below in my signature. When the Moon Rises, Awakening and Last Hope are my originals. Smile
    January 3rd, 2013 at 10:35am
  • spacejunkie

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    All of my stories are original fiction. The Macabre Tales of Young Edgar is now a published book. Stone Angels is another finished novel. Son, Waves and Angels and Demons are good short stories (Waves is my favourite, and very brief), and The Cemetery Diaries is an ongoing surrealist piece about a vampire.
    January 3rd, 2013 at 09:10am
  • indigo.

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    Nothing's wrong with you. I think... well, tbh, after reading this blog, I'm glad there's someone else out there who I can relate to with regards to the whole boy-relationship department thingy. It's like ... just ... this feeling that creeps up on you so slowly and suddenly, you can't face the guy after he tells you that likes you, or asks you out, or just something.

    I dunno. Is that how it's like for you?

    Anyway, I have an original fiction: Truth or Dare on here.
    January 3rd, 2013 at 08:46am
  • Little Robyn;

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    You could read my story, Iris. It's original.
    January 3rd, 2013 at 07:54am