Favorite Line You've Ever Written

  • liam payne.

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    "ALWAYS LARD!" declared Shmiggle. He jiggled his jiggle and huffed his hufflepuff. He picked daisies and ate some crazy waises. He danced in meadows and sang in his sleep. He was Shmiggle the wiggling caterpillar and he was the best caterpillar that the land of Dingleshimg has ever seen."

    It's actually from a very serious story of mine. The mood was tense, so I had to lighten it up somehow -shrugs-
    November 27th, 2009 at 05:52am
  • da svidaniya

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    The sight of those two fueled such a rage in Marcus. It was like nothing he had ever felt before. It was not the cool feeling that usually flooded him, this was a new hot and violent smothering hate that threatened to consume him if he didn’t get away fast enough.
    We Can't Wake Up

    Tonight we shall creep through the dark, dank streets to that shining house upon the hill. Tonight the cold wet air will seep through our clothes, grasp at our dark flesh and tickle it into goosebumps.

    Only when the last white master has turned the white carpet crimson shall we know freedom.

    The latter two are from my one-shot Freedom
    November 27th, 2009 at 11:59am
  • kittaykat.

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    She was always making a sorry attempt to involve herself in the usual chatter at the table, but the girl was far too involved with rummaging her swollen sausages through several bags of sweet cakes. I would occasionally gag to myself as I saw dozens of processed sweets disappearing through the cavernous hole on her face. Oddly enough, I’m surprised she never noticed.
    November 28th, 2009 at 07:14pm
  • jenna.is.crazy.

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    well I read one quote somewhere that I love its:

    "He's the geek to your Star Wars!"

    And then one in my story Cuts of Glory:

    "I need to hear your voice, to see if it's beautfiful just like you."
    November 28th, 2009 at 08:08pm
  • Marty Mcfly

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    "You know you've reached maturity when you address him as a sodomizer instead of as a butt-poker." he said, shaking his head.
    Craig sprinkled more sugar onto his pancakes. "I think I've aged so much."
    He wrinkled his nose. "Which is why you still refuse to wear clothes at the table?"
    Craig leaned over as if telling a very deeep and personal secret. "I won't tell anyone if you do it too."


    It's for a story I decided lacked vision and never finished.
    November 29th, 2009 at 02:41am
  • chai latte

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    “i’m sorry,
    but if you don’t take at least one bite,
    i can’t be with you anymore.
    if i don’t like my pork
    with protruding bones
    what makes you think
    i like my girlfriend that way?”

    for the record, we’re over.

    -Gaunt, chapter two
    November 29th, 2009 at 03:50am
  • The Dodger

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    This is actually a paragraph, but it's one of my favorites from 'Cause the Chicks Dig It'

    It has been said that there is no greater joy than becoming a parent. And really, this statement is true for the most part. Every mother has the same look when she holds her son or daughter in her arms for the fist time, and so do the fathers. To anyone else, the look would be a loving, doting, look that says that they are imagining the wonderful things that will become of their child.
    They have mastered faking this look.
    What they are actually thinking is, “Please God, don’t let me screw this up.” They aren't thinking of all the good things their child may go on to do; they’re wondering what’s the worst that could happen.
    November 29th, 2009 at 04:03am
  • adolescent.carnage

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    I would have to say mine is;

    So it wasn't a psychopathic murderer here to leave my magled corpse for them to find.

    But this comes in a close second.

    The familiar scent of sweat and cigarettes filled the air. I was home.

    Both are from story ideas that just didn't go anywhere.
    November 29th, 2009 at 04:40am
  • and love alice ;

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    She let the words sink in. Just like the alcohol would. Death.

    ~ Elisabeth Montague, What Doesn't Kill Us...Eventually Will
    November 29th, 2009 at 03:57pm
  • liam payne.

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    Katelyn.:
    This is actually a paragraph, but it's one of my favorites from 'Cause the Chicks Dig It'

    It has been said that there is no greater joy than becoming a parent. And really, this statement is true for the most part. Every mother has the same look when she holds her son or daughter in her arms for the fist time, and so do the fathers. To anyone else, the look would be a loving, doting, look that says that they are imagining the wonderful things that will become of their child.
    They have mastered faking this look.
    What they are actually thinking is, “Please God, don’t let me screw this up.” They aren't thinking of all the good things their child may go on to do; they’re wondering what’s the worst that could happen.
    That's really good. Shocked
    November 30th, 2009 at 12:55am
  • taliaroks

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    Ava looked at me. “I told you those Quilette boys were weird”
    December 1st, 2009 at 07:45am
  • Otis Otis

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    "They're merely labels darling. What we're called and what we are can not separate someone from loving another. With differences, we learn more about people and we come to love those that are our complete opposites."
    It's a future line for my story Cupcakes, Rainbows and Black Roses that Darcy says.
    For some reason, I absolutely love it.
    December 2nd, 2009 at 06:25pm
  • Coheed Kilgannon

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    “I’M SORRY I DON’T WANT TO CONTRACT YOUR STDS, BY TOUCHING YOUR BLOOD!”

    lmfao

    Unposted, but soon will be.
    December 6th, 2009 at 01:46am
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    "Prom is supposed to be a night of magic, and an end to the chapter of your life that is called “High School” or “Hell,” if you prefer. Or that’s what the movies tell us, at least. That’s a blatant lie fed to us by Molly Ringwald. - Ellie The Lies of Molly Ringwald

    “This is a dream.”
    Turning me to face him he asked, “A dream or a nightmare, ma Cherie?”[i/] -Amber and Lestat
    On the Edge of Eternity

    “You think you offer me eternal life, but what you really offer me is eternal hell and damnation.”
    “What?” he asked again.
    “Sometimes I wonder what terrible sin it was I committed in life to merit a hell such as this.”
    -Amber
    On the Edge of Eternity
    December 6th, 2009 at 05:51am
  • Venomous.

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    For someone on the brink of falling into nonexistence, time meant little.
    December 6th, 2009 at 12:34pm
  • ladyhawke.

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    "How can one person, even if they aren't fully human, be so amazing."
    - Joseph Carmichael in 'All i Wanted.'
    December 6th, 2009 at 05:59pm
  • isangelical.

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    "Tom hates these colors, these tints and shades. These hues of melted childhood dreams. Murdered Crayola memories."

    From Lead.
    December 8th, 2009 at 01:44am
  • Zachary Merrick.

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    “Okay…” Rian said slowly “The cutlery has paid for its heinous crime of existing, now would you please calm down?”

    Sure, he wasn’t Alex, but he was just right to fit the boy-shaped space in Jack’s heart.
    Both from 57 Hilton Street.

    And this is more of a paragraph from an unfinished contest entry:
    Jack found himself stealing glances of the boy that appeared to be in charge of the pack. He was cute - Jack would give him that - and his mousy brown hair had just a dishevelled edge to it that Jack found alarmingly appealing. His eyes - huge, a brown color just darker than that of his hair - stood out dramatically from the almost tan of his skin. His eyes searched the room as he talked to his friends, Jack noticed. The blue and gray plaid shirt he was wearing draped his tiny frame, drowning out most of the definition of his abdomen. Denim clung to his legs, displaying their every feature.

    It took Jack everything to rip his eyes away from the boy when Alex dragged him away.
    December 9th, 2009 at 08:50pm
  • ComputerGirl12

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    here's my favorite lines:

    "The curtains, which were a purple silk, not to mention her favorite color; were hanging on for dear life to their rods as the raging wind blew them inside her bedroom."
    "She sighed, trying to slow her breathing. Maybe this morning she could delay her daily chores by pretending she was still asleep."
    "Yeah, that was one of her chores: to make breakfast for the devil. She wasn't allowed to eat breakfast until Leslie was finished. Her stomach grumbled.
    Her life was so unfair. "
    '"She looked for a bright side to the situation and found none. Then she put her head in her hands and tried her hardest to pay attention to what she was teaching."
    "After what seemed an infinite amount of eternities, the bell rang for the dismissal of health class and all the students except Gabrunesa sprung from their seats and ran out of the classroom, chatting and whispering amongst themselves."
    "Her hands flew to her ears as the bus tires screeched to a halt."
    " No, of course she couldn't be like a normal teenager, who slept in on weekends."
    " She sighed, coughed once more, then opened the next dust covered box."
    -from Whispering Time Away http://stories.mibba.com/read/219528/Whispering-Time-Away/

    "His heart was stolen. He didn't want it back."
    -Can't Keep Loving You From A distancehttp://stories.mibba.com/read/222853/Cant-Keep-On-Loving-You-From-A-Distance/

    "I looked at the teacher, and jumped as I felt something on top of my hand."
    -A Dreamy Day in Spanish 2http://stories.mibba.com/read/223203/A-Dreamy-Day-in-Spanish-2/1/
    "All around her, overgrown bushes and shrubs were situated all around her. It was as if she were in the middle of a jungle, or a forest. In fact, she could have probably went on a safari through it, and get lost. But, this wasn't a forest, or a jungle, or a safari. It was far from it. Seperating her from the chaos, was a long line of barbed wire. It was a barbed wire fence, and it seperated her from an adventure."
    "It had been twelve years she had been on the farm, six of them wanting to escape."
    "The only social life she had was with her parents, Kevin, and her family, when they came over for Thanksgiving, Christmas, and any other holiday that was worth driving an hour to their farm for."
    "They were going to enjoy the time and temporary freedom they had from their parents. This was their escape, at least for a little while."
    -This was their escape, at least for a little while
    http://stories.mibba.com/read/223782/This-was-their-escape-at-least-for-a-little-while/1/

    "It was well into the school year now, and all the students bustled through the halls, chatting excitedly about where they were going for Thanksgiving weekend, and what they were going to do."
    "It wasn’t Jackie’s parents. It was a police officer, telling them that Jackie’s parents had died in a car crash."
    -BFFLAD- The Story of Two Seniorshttp://stories.mibba.com/read/224340/BFFLAD-The-Story-of-Two-Seniors/1/

    "It only made it worse when the sun was at its highest peak, and then the plum juice heated on their heads and then there was nothing they could do about it after that."
    -Plums and Homeless Peoplehttp://stories.mibba.com/read/224346/Plums-and-Homeless-People/1/

    So, those are my favorite lines. Please check them out and leave a comment.
    December 11th, 2009 at 12:48am
  • swell

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    I like writing comments that make me LOL.

    He sounded so helpless; I wanted to tell the thing to grow some balls or something.
    But I didn't think it'd go down so well.
    - Maybe It's A Sign Of Weakness Draco Malfoy.

    And this:
    The snow circled around us as I took a step forward, closing the gap between us. He smiled at me, and gently touched his warm hand on my face, stroking it gently with his fingers. I tilted my head and closed my eyes, waiting for his lips to touch mine. As his lips lightly brushed against mine... - Secret Admirers. one shot.
    December 16th, 2009 at 09:35am