Gah! I know I'm only 13, and will probably be ashamed of the writing I do now, somewhere in the future, but I looked back at the first chapter of my first story, and the dialogue was awful, my vocabulary was limited, the story was just a bunch of cliches rolled into one, and my main charecter was just like every other female main character that I've ever read about. Pretty, but doesn't see her beauty. Has a big appetite, but doesn't get fat. And her best friend is in love with her, except she's too stupid to see it.
What I'm more ashamed of is the fact that I'm writing the sequel to this story, and it's just as cliche Dx
What I'm more ashamed of is the fact that I'm writing the sequel to this story, and it's just as cliche Dx
July 24th, 2011 at 04:27am