Comment the Story Title.

I like it. It's simple and it makes me wonder what the story is about, and I would definitely read it.

Like Skinned Hearts
(Unposted)

It sounds violent! I love the incomplete similie effect of the title and I'd love to know what the symbolism of it was - or it could be slightly abstract in connection, which I often like. At first glance, it seems quite soft, but then you focus on the word "skinned" and it sounds slightly unnerving and eerie. It's great.

Concordi Discordia
(Unposted)

The image it creates is kinda brutal, but it makes me think of a relationship-gone-wrong kind of story rather than a horror story. I like it, though, it's intriguing.

I don't know what it means, but I'm assuming it's Italian? /languagefail I love the rhythm of the words, though, and the repetition of cordi. It sounds vaguely musical, but that might just be because discordia reminds me of discordant. But yeah, it's pretty and I rather like it.

Find Your Own Way (Back Home).

I love the parentheses. The beginning of the sentences sounds sort of harsh and then the parentheses give it an almost maternal feel. It's very nice.

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S/he.
(posted)

Sounds very interesting. It definitely catches my eye, I want to go read it. I most likely will. I'm not entirely sure what it could be about, but that makes it all the more interesting.

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Desperation.
(posted)

I like the simplicity of it, but that it makes me curious at the same time.

Nearly Beloved
(unposted)

It makes me picture a relationship where they almost care about a person but then sort of hate them at the same time.

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Learning to Fall.
(tentative title)

It makes me think of small animals learning to walk (like Bambi on the ice) and a song. I'm not sure what one, but I can hear it in my head. The story sounds kind of soft and sad, like it's told from the point of view of someone in pain, emotional or physical.

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What Max Needs
(possible title)

I like it. It's simple, but it presents a question and kind of draws you in. Very nice.

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October 19th

(unposted)

I think that it sounds very interesting. It makes me wonder what happened on October 19th that it's so important to be the title of the story, and it makes me wonder just what kind of story is behind it.

The World Is A Madhouse
(unposted)

I like this. It makes me think there will be a mental disorder or at least some mental chaos, which is always awesome when well executed.

The Amateur Photographer.
(posted)

I like it. Simply "The Photographer" would seem lacking, and adding amateur gives it a sort of character - like someone working to get better, as most amateurs are.

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Vinyl
(posted)

I like it a lot. It makes me think of older times, with Elvis and such. Also makes me think of dirty things, but that's just 'cause I'm a perv.

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End of Silence
(posted)

I like it. It makes me wonder what happened to break the silence and how long the silence lasted before it was broken.

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The Blood on the Kitchen Floor.
(posted)

Sounds interesting and kind of mysterious. Makes me want to go check it out.

Heaven Help Us
(posted)

It's intriguing. I want to know why they need help and who exactly they are and why they're there.

Concordi Discordia
- posted

I love it. I love that it's two words and I love that it's in another language. It makes me think things with be chaotic somewhat.

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My Sins Are My Own.
(posted)

I like how exciting it sounds. It would deffinately catch my eye if I saw it. Makes me think of danger and regret and similar things.

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Freak of Nature.
(posted)

I like the sound of it. By the sound of it, I don't even know what it'll be about. It's intriguing.

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Scream From the Pleasure
(posted)

It makes me wonder if scream is a noun or a verb. I get the feeling it's a story with sex, which I appreciate.

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The Boy with the Protest Sign.
(posted)