Girls in the Summertime

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    @ Dreamer's Aly Cat
    Is that your real name as well?
    July 4th, 2012 at 09:28pm
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    @ Matty Mullins
    I'm not quite sure what you mean by that. "Ox keeper" is merely the meaning of my last name, which I'd prefer not to tell anyone. *blushes*
    July 4th, 2012 at 09:36pm
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    @ Dreamer's Aly Cat
    Aha, sorry I just misunderstood your last message.
    But hey come one, my last name is Hørlyk literally no one can pronounce it.
    Non-Danish people pronounce it like "Horelyk" -.-'
    July 4th, 2012 at 09:41pm
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    @ Matty Mullins
    LOL. You just made me feel all better. :) And I feel sorry for you, though! That must be awful!

    @ Matty Mullins @ Take Me Down
    Oh, and I posted my chapter. ^.^
    July 4th, 2012 at 09:47pm
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    @ Dreamer's Aly Cat
    Haha well I'm glad I did, haha :) And it is, but the last name I had before I changed it was, Brodersen so it's not any better :D

    - And that's awesome! :'D
    July 4th, 2012 at 09:58pm
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    Uuuh! Cher Lloyd, I absolutely adore that girl! :D
    - And I loved the chapter!
    July 4th, 2012 at 10:06pm
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    @ Matty Mullins
    Thank you. *blushes* Did you really? I felt like it was awful, just awful. Like as if everyone word was forced out of Lucy's skull. XD
    July 4th, 2012 at 10:44pm
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    @ Dreamer's Aly Cat
    Noo don't feel like that. The chapter was perfect! :D
    July 4th, 2012 at 10:57pm
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    @ Matty Mullins
    *blushes* Thank you. :)
    July 4th, 2012 at 11:19pm
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    @ Dreamer's Aly Cat
    Hey I think your chapter is amazing. Don't worry about it. I think it is awesome and that the Clumsy Chris part is perfect, very cool character development. I'll get going on my chapter :D

    @ Matty Mullins
    Wow, your character's last name is too cool for school, no joke. Anyways, makes my character's last name feel weirdly modern.

    I'll keep posted when I have my chapter up.
    July 5th, 2012 at 01:01am
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    @ Take Me Down
    Eeeeeeep! I'm so excited to read it! And you really liked the Clumsy Chris? I thought adding him would make y'all mad for some reason. X{P I honestly thought y'all would be all, "Why did you give Lucy a crush if she's gonna end up with Nick?"
    July 5th, 2012 at 01:04am
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    @ Dreamer's Aly Cat
    NOOO! It would be too cliche if it was just Nick, ya know? It is normal for teenage girls to have multiple love interests and I really love that Clumsy Chris is in the story, brings more complex and characteristics to Lucy's storyline.

    By the way, do you mind if Lucy comes over to Blake's house after Olive Garden?
    July 5th, 2012 at 01:21am
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    @ Take Me Down
    You really think so? I just thought it made Lucy more relatable—good girl falling for the good guy. Even though most girls love bad boys, I believe that there are at least a handful or two of us that prefer good guys. :)

    Nope. I don't mind at all.

    Do you think we should invite Clumsy Chris to the beach with us?
    July 5th, 2012 at 01:31am
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    @ Dreamer's Aly Cat
    Well, there's different types of girls in the world. Some like it bad, but most of us just want someone who really cares about us. And it is always good to make Lucy relatable... Clumsy Chris seems very quirky and I love guys who are like that, so don't even worry. We are going to do good, staying away from the cliches (that's what I wanna do, to make our story unique without being too far off or too damn cliche-- although a bit of cliche is so awesome every once in a while)

    And awesome, I just plan for Blake to catch up with her bros and go home, hang out with her two best friends after dinner time (for sleepover or something).

    Also, didn't you have a plan for the beach on your next chapter? If you plan for Clumsy Chris to join our characters, then go for it. If you had other plans originally, then do as you wish because I trust that you will nail it, either way.
    July 5th, 2012 at 03:03am
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    @ Take Me Down
    Yeah, I hate when a story is so full of clichés that it's not even funny. But the whole romance genre is a cliché, in my opinion.

    And it sounds like a plan.

    And I think having Lucy invite Clumsy Chris would really add some drama to the scene I was planning at the beach. :)
    July 5th, 2012 at 02:09pm
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    @ Dreamer's Aly Cat
    I totally agree with you on the romance. No matter what, I cannot not like romance. But other stories bring it to the extremes, like I've seen or read the story a million times.

    Yes, awesome! I've been hanging out with friends lately, so I will get to it tomorrow? Also, it's good to leave some time gaps between the chapters (although not too long).

    If it brings drama onto your scene, then you shall go for it. I like me some drama.
    July 6th, 2012 at 05:06am
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    @ Take Me Down
    IKR?

    That all sounds like a plan to me. :D
    July 6th, 2012 at 02:05pm
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    @ Matty Mullins
    I have a quick question for you, Sara, before I complete my chapter. Which college to you intend for Allison to attend.

    Blake is going to Stanford University in Stanford, California for her business. Lucy is going to Manhattan Music School in Manhattan, New York for her music. So do you have a university in mind for Allison? If you are a bit uncertain about the colleges in the U.S. at least tell me what is the main course she would like to study and then i can hook you up from there.

    Wait, I decided not to cover the sleep over part, only the beginning... since I spend so much time on the graduation. So is it okay for you to cover the sleep over, Sara? You can make our characters confess or do whatever you want, and you can format your chapter to however you like.

    @ Dreamer's Aly Cat
    I tried to delete my character from the character's page since it seems like you guys might not post yours up (it'll be awkward with only my character up there), but I can't delete my character from the page. So do you guys mind posting your characters up as well? I'm going to include Blake's brothers and D on the characters page, yeah?
    July 6th, 2012 at 08:36pm
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    @ Fast Girl

    Oh I'm sorry.
    Allison is going to Academy of Art University in San Francisco :)
    And I'll add my character now.
    July 6th, 2012 at 10:04pm
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    @ Fast Girl
    I'll get Lucy, Jessie, and Nick up ASAP.

    Ooh, should we add Clumsy Chris?

    No, we shouldn't. He'll be moving away—UNLESS HE DECIDES TO STAY FOR AWHILE AND BE WITH LUCY! :D I'm a genius!
    July 6th, 2012 at 10:10pm