@ yaoi girl.
Jesus Christ woman, you're asking for too much here.
Let me read the last three pages and I'll summarise for you
THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU GO TO SCHOOLEdit: Just read the first page, I've put down who died (it's a chick), how she died, the other character's story plots and we've decided that each character all contributes to her death but not on purpose. So like for example Samara could've told the chick to fuck off if the chick asked her for advice on something. So Samara feels like she's partly responsible since she didn't listen to the girl.
OH AND I CHANGED MARA TO SAMARA
Page 2 has the other two character plots.
And as for writing the story, this is how it's going to go:
We have our normal round of chapters based on the present (so, them being 21-22/maybe just finished college or living their lives or something) but we're also going to have interludes - which are basically flashbacks in the victim's point of view about how she died. But the interludes will contain how the victim and our character were connected prior to her death.
The interludes won't be a separate round of chapters, though. It'll go like how Raveena wrote it down in the post above mine. So a round of our chapters, and then when we feel it's needed we'll chuck in an interlude chapter. But the interlude chapter won't substitute one of our own - it'll mean that we will all eventually write two chapters in one round. Make sense?