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  • noriko.

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    @ grow a pair
    Yes, well.
    Viv is the violent type Coffee
    If you couldn't tell by the spider surgery and playing games with ants. File

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    Cousins, perhaps?

    Also, I've always wondered.
    You know when people are like, oh yeah, I'm her aunt twice removed...
    WHAT DOES THE TWICE REMOVED MEAN?? Facepalm

    Completely irrelevant, I know >.>
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:17am
  • raja sahara

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    @ yaoi girl.
    But Samara and Levi are also cousins...
    SO MANY COUSINS.
    Lol what if they were like illegitimate brothers? O_o
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:23am
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    Okies.
    I like that.
    Some dirtiness in this town tehe
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:30am
  • raja sahara

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    @ yaoi girl.
    Maybe that can also contribute to Jordan moving to Japan? Like maybe Levi's father wanted to reach out to his third son and Jordan's father didn't want that so they moved, along with the other reason you posted that I have forgotten...

    Idk, only if you like it. They could also just become close buddies by the end of the story. Like Dan and Nate in Gossip Girl lol.
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:37am
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    I suppose she is like Hermione but I always got the impression that Hermione needed to be the one to put her hand up because it made her feel superior or something. As in, she loved to be the smartest and stuff. Samara doesn't need to be the smartest, but she does have to do well.

    Hmm, that is true. Unless they're all friends then? But then if Julienne is friends with Samara, that means that Jules, Samara, Levi and Ryan and Jessica probably would've all hung out at one point but Julienne and Levi never got it on because of Levi's love for Jessica?

    Unless they're not friends, like they both despise each other for some reason but like to make fun of Ryan or something. Maybe they find each other annoying?

    Even though they are related, I don't really see Samara caring much for Levi because she's caught up in herself and her own problems. That makes her sound self-centered, but yeah.
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:38am
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    @ grow a pair
    They could all be friends! That could work! But not like a Friends or How I Met Your Mother-type group, just like the occasional hang out after school or if someone goes to a coffee shop and someone else is there, why not talk to him/her? Levi and Ryan, though, are childhood friends (like Shawn and Cory from Boy Meets World).

    As for Samara and Levi, they could just like acknowledge that they exist and are cousins, but they don't have a real relationship. Like both of them are too focused on other things to care about each other. That sounds good to me.

    Oh also, should I make the layout?
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:43am
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    If you could make the layout, that would be great Cute
    thank you!

    We should establish a hang out place, probably 1-2 places they routinely hang out at/things to do, even. Like go-karting or paintballing or something.

    Levi/Ryan sounds good. For Samara/Ryan, I was thinking that they've always known each other but never really hung out - Samara's in the smart/popular group and Ryan chilled with Levi but maybe he could be a bit of a jock? I'm not fussed. And then in the first year of sophomore year, they properly meet after escaping the seniors and they become friends from there. I didn't want them to be friends forever like Levi/Ryan but I did want Ryan to be Samara's first love. Even though it was unrequited. Is that the word? I think it is.
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:55am
  • raja sahara

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    In my eyes, they were both jocks but Levi did it because maybe Ryan convinced him to go to tryouts for lacrosse or something? And that's something that makes him more insecure because Jonathan won a football scholarship to Harvard and he just did lacrosse lol. Jonathan is better at basically everything than him.

    Your Samara things sounds good! It sounds realistic in this story :)
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:09am
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    Ooh yeah, I see what you mean.
    So lacrosse isn't as big in Rosaleigh High than football. Friday night football games could be a hangout thing for everyone to do - more like a town event though. Like when they verse their rivals, the whole town is in full support of the team and stuff. But when lacrosse is mentioned, people are like, 'um, what?' Or it's just not as big in Rosaleigh. Or it could be big, but people don't take it seriously as much as football.

    Okay, so I feel like we've established what happens in the past pretty well, but we need some sort of general plot for the present - or at least, figure out some of the major plot points so we can work our way to them if that makes sense.

    As for posting order, this is what Raveena had before but are we all fine with this?

    Chapter 1: Samara
    Chapter 2: Jordan
    Chapter 3: Levi
    Chapter 4: Julienne
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:21am
  • raja sahara

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    @ grow a pair
    Lacrosse can be popular, but football can be huge. Like it's a big thing to be apart of.

    Yeah, I think we're good with the past.

    Also, I finished the layout!

    EDIT: OR Levi could be apart of the football team but always overlooked because of his brother. I actually like that more. It'd make more sense.
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:36am
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    Oooh yay.

    I think I just added you guys to the story, I'm about to put my character up soon.
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:41am
  • noriko.

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    I'M COOL WITH THAT Yu
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:42am
  • raja sahara

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    @ yaoi girl. @ grow a pair @ blades

    For the record, this ain't my best layout. :/
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:44am
  • noriko.

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    Lewl, dat's okay tehe
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:46am
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    Levi, you cutie pie.
    Ugh I'm in love with him already.

    Oooh, it's pretty. I like it.
    Did you have anyone in mind for who was in the photo or was it just random? Coz I instantly thought of Levi/Ryan/Jessica and Levi/Ryan/Samara. It's like they're two big love triangles. Or a square.
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:46am
  • raja sahara

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    If only he were real :(

    I didn't have anyone in mind! I tried finding a picture with four people but it was rather difficult D:
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:48am
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    Ooh, okay.
    I have all these pictures saved of groups of fours and threes, but they're all girls or all guys, never mixed File
    While I do like the picture, I'm going to keep looking for one with four people, if that's alright.
    Edit: I found a picture but it was too small -_-. I like that it's in the lake though.
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:58am
  • raja sahara

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    Sure, as long as colors match. I was just looking for lake pictures since that's where it all fell apart and all and came across that.
    March 29th, 2013 at 05:03am
  • swell

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    I couldn't find group pics (except for this and I wasn't sure if ocean = lake.

    I also found this and this but idk if they went with the colours.

    Can lakes even have waves?

    Edit:
    I also found
    this and
    this

    Feel free to shoot them all down. I got a bit carried away. Facepalm
    March 29th, 2013 at 05:11am
  • noriko.

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    I LIKE THE HAIKEN ONE.
    THE SECOND LINK.
    JUS' SAYIN'.

    But I'm cool with whatever tehe

    So, for the characters, are we linking them in the summary, or are we going to do a character's page?
    Cute
    March 29th, 2013 at 05:23am