@ kili the dwarf
@ luminos.
oh, my god. I totally forgot that it was my turn again, and that we were getting back on track of the posting order. ffs.
And I haven't been online over the weekend. Anyways, I'm almost done with the chapter, I just need a few things cleared up. Like the setting...
Would Cara and her group already be out of the city and more into the 'country'? Because Michael and Gray just got forced out of their small 'no where' town and treehouse. And I'm writing the part where Liam comes into their lives. So they're just a day travel (with detours) from Cara. So I'm just wondering where they were, so I don't mess anything up.
And if we're going to make up the next couple of chapters, my plan for this one is that well,
Grace and Michael got forced out of their treehouse, and they've been moving non-stop for six nights, but they lost the horde two nights ago, but they're still on edge. And when they've settled, I'm getting them in a building of some sort. And then I'm writing from Liam's POV, and he'll explain what's going on and why he's on his own at the moment, and then he'll over hear a conversation between Michael and Grace, and he'll show himself when he hears that she's in distress about her brother who he knows. And he and Michael will have a show down kind of thing, because trust. And when he says/does something to show that he's genuine, they'll go with him. And he'll say they'll get there in a few hours, or the next day if they run into trouble.
So Marissa, hopefully that would help with your chapter a bit.
@ luminos.
oh, my god. I totally forgot that it was my turn again, and that we were getting back on track of the posting order. ffs.
And I haven't been online over the weekend. Anyways, I'm almost done with the chapter, I just need a few things cleared up. Like the setting...
Would Cara and her group already be out of the city and more into the 'country'? Because Michael and Gray just got forced out of their small 'no where' town and treehouse. And I'm writing the part where Liam comes into their lives. So they're just a day travel (with detours) from Cara. So I'm just wondering where they were, so I don't mess anything up.
And if we're going to make up the next couple of chapters, my plan for this one is that well,
Grace and Michael got forced out of their treehouse, and they've been moving non-stop for six nights, but they lost the horde two nights ago, but they're still on edge. And when they've settled, I'm getting them in a building of some sort. And then I'm writing from Liam's POV, and he'll explain what's going on and why he's on his own at the moment, and then he'll over hear a conversation between Michael and Grace, and he'll show himself when he hears that she's in distress about her brother who he knows. And he and Michael will have a show down kind of thing, because trust. And when he says/does something to show that he's genuine, they'll go with him. And he'll say they'll get there in a few hours, or the next day if they run into trouble.
So Marissa, hopefully that would help with your chapter a bit.
January 27th, 2014 at 08:06pm