Your First Story

I just dug up what was probably my first out of school story.
It's about some kind of horse community. ._.;;

My first story on mibba was one of those total cliche Frerards.
Oh God, it was tragically bad.

Before Mibba... I wrote a story about a girl who moved schools and developed a crush on this total bitch's boyfreind (based on my own crush at the time.) I was soooo bad back then, but at least I didn't fall into the classic 'emo/prep' character trap.

I like to think I've advanced alot in my plot development, subject matter and writing skill. :XD

Haha, my first story was a Joel Madden fanfiction.
It was so bad, it was like:
Bob: hi my name is bob, what is yours
Amanda: my name is amanda.

I've grown up so much since then. XD
Although I still write fanfiction more than any other. :P

Haha!

My first story (or should I say stories) was this blatant Phantom Stallion rip off called... wait for it...

Ghost Horse.

Not copying at all, eh? Anyways, it was awful. But I still get a kick out of reading it. :)

My first fanfiction was this really, really, really long thing about Gerard Way falling in love with an exchange student who came to live with him (who also just so happened to have my first name, personality, and looks.) Looking back on it now, the plotline was actually pretty original-- at least, I haven't stumbled across an exchange student MCR fiction yet-- but it was majorly lacking in most areas.

Speaking of it now, I might re-write it and post it here...

With a differently named and described heroine. :cute:

:XD
My first stories (it has a sequel :cheese:)are still on my page. I don't have the heart to delete it, but oh my God. It's bad.

I deleted my first one. :lmfao
It was a random Metallica thing. :cheese:
I want to read it again :tehe:

But yeah, technically, the first story that is still here is an AC/DC thing. :tehe: Which I love.

My first story was: "Would An Angel, Devil, Or Demon Fall In Love With You?" It was posted on Quizilla when I was thirteen years old.

>.<

Oh, god, it was so bad, lol.

"Alexander is walking to the place you are standing right now at the moment because he want to be closer to you always."

My first story EVER? I was maybe four or five years old. I found it lying around in my room and I read it. It didn't make any sense but when I read it out loud it sounded a little too educated to be written by a five year old. XD
So I just continued writing from there, writing a whole bunch of stories everyday ever since my first one.
But the first story that I wrote (which I actually remember the plot) was maybe a year ago. The whole plot was extremely cliché and no one really liked it. >.<

Quote

As I finished my morning round of saying good morning to Karla, my human, going to the litter tray, having my breakfast and a sip of water I wandered outside and to smell the morning fresh air.

I padded across the yard to the fence and sprung up and landed on the top and looked out over the national park reserve behind my house. This to me looked like something between the Sahara plains and the Amazon jungle.

I picked up on footsteps coming from the laundry; I looked over to see my human coming out with a basket thing filled with the rags they put on their bodies. I’ve always wondered why they don’t have fur like me.

She smiled as soon as she saw me and said “hello Puss-Puss” I mewed back my reply and continued looking at my jungle/plain.

-head desk-
One from a few years back. I think I was, like, ten at the time.

My first story I wrote that I remember was for this school project when I was like 11. It was meant to be a short story but I got a little carried away with it and just couldn't stop writing. It spanned like over a month of these characters lives.

It was about the plague (which was our project), had character names from the game Golden Sun, and was called Death Like Wild Fire. I'd love to read it again, but I think it's on my old computer.. Which is in the loft.
:XD

My first story I posted on a website, though... It had a ridiculously long name, was posted on quizilla, was a bfmv fan fiction, was very cliche and done the whole 'meeting to marriage' thing in 30 chapters. Yeah. It was bad.
:shifty

Not my first. My first was probably better. It was written in second grade in a Lisa Frank binder and it was about a magical pond.

Here's a snippet from one of my Backstreet Boys decorated folders back in 7th grade. Typed as written.

She was 11 years old. Light brown, curly hair like her dad. Tall with green eyes like her mom. 2 brothers, 6 & 2. Trying to get her to go school on the first day of 6th grade.

[Rachel's POV]

"No!" I cried running behind the couch. "I don't want to go to school. Everyone there can just go to Hell." Dad look straight at me. "What did you say?" he asked sternly. "Umm. Everyone at school is awesome & I'd better get my bag, huh?"

Starving For His Touch

It's so badly written :tehe: sort of.

My first fanfic was a Sonny Moore (formerly of From First To Last) fanfic. It's not on Mibba for A LOT of reasons. My first original was Destiny, which is on Mibba. It's not my best work (writing style-wise) but I'm very attached to it and every once in a while, I reread it. I dunno. It's cute and I love it like a child.

On Mibba: Flower Garden.
Deleted it--it was too cliche.

The very first story I've posted here has the most comments and stars so far.
I just didn't finish it.
It's a Gerard Way/OFC

I liked it. The story line, I mean. But the way I wrote it. Meh. The grammar sucked.

Ugh, I deleted mine. It was so cliche and boring - just about a schoolgirl who has a guy as a best friend at high school and falls in love with this guy but her guy best friend gets jealous and they share a magical kiss blaaaaa blaa...

Shadow Of The Day

:XD
I have all these oneshots from last spring that are just horrible. I edited them slightly the other day, but ugh, they're not pretty.

My first story was posted in a fan forum. It was written really bad. I don't want to look at it anymore, even though I still have the files on my computer. :XD

It was really bad ... I used chatspeaks, and the conversation went like this:

(Your name): Hey!!
(Your best friend): Hey!

:XD It was really bad! I didn't even use proper grammars and spelling.

My first story definitely was not as sophisticated as the ones I'm writing now. Honestly, I don't even know where it is. All I do know is that it was mostly dialogue and wasn't very good. I think I may have deleted it completely, not realizing that I might have wanted it back, which I do. Actually, that first story that was deleted inspired a completely different story, written way better.

My first story was on Sims 2... well my first public story
It was so cliched. About two sisters, but then they father dies and the older one have to look after them. But of course, with the Sims 2... you have to upload another chapter in a different house... so they ended up seperating because the younger one slept with someone in the father's bed so they fell out.

Each chapter they lived somewhere else. It was so bad, I never even planned any of it. Just whatever came to mind. Thankfully, I wasn't apart of "She was seventeen, with long blonde hair and blue eyes"... I seen that too many times before I made stories public that I hated it.

Then I actually done another Sims 2 story with less moving houses lmfao. Then I just moved to Quizilla then here, because I was sick of the amount of effect. 9 pages or more for a chapter, then all the pictures... which most had to be photoshopped. :)