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  • erratic

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    Paul's character grew on me, too. After I ended Lasting Impression, I actually thought about making the sequel about him and Chloe, but after writing a few chapters of the sequel, it just didn't feel right anymore.

    Hehe. It looks like Jason has won over yet another one of my readers. I can't help writing cute kids into the story :)

    The pregnant woman was a tad overemotional. Fish and alcohol are things that you're supposed to avoid during pregnancy because they could harm the baby, so she freaked out when Chloe served them. She could have taken it better, but I needed something to top off that horrible day.

    Thank you for the comment!
    February 2nd, 2010 at 02:34pm
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    That thought is always in the back of my mind as I'm writing, but as much as I wanna please everyone, Chloe's gonna have to pick either Paul, Alex, or neither. I know there is a risk of haterade spillage amongst teams, but that's the way drama works--at least one person ends up getting hurt.

    Plus if a person has stuck around and read almost 200 pages of the story that I've posted, I figure that they're gonna keep reading.

    But if not, I'll wear a helmet and work on my fruit-dodging skills.

    ;)
    December 28th, 2009 at 10:04pm
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    If you liked the vows, I feel like my job is done.
    Except not really since there's still a lot more chapters to write for Decisions, Decisions. lol.

    Here in Chicago, it's 4:11AM and I'm still awake and writing because I just got a burst of inspiration while listening to Cobra Starship.

    Anyways, thank you for the story comment!
    December 28th, 2009 at 11:13am
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    Thanks for the comment, yo!

    Alex will be arriving shortly, but in the meantime, I'm glad you enjoyed Jack's antics in this chapter.

    Early Merry Christmas to you, too!
    XD
    December 11th, 2009 at 05:05pm
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    I'm glad you enjoyed the randomness of the last chapter.
    I had as much fun writing it as you did reading it.

    Thanks for commenting!
    December 7th, 2009 at 07:33pm
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    Hehe.
    Paul's side has been pretty lonely as of late, so I'm glad I won you over :)
    Thanks for the story comment!
    November 6th, 2009 at 03:51pm
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    Aww.
    Thank you for the story comment!
    November 1st, 2009 at 09:29pm
  • erratic

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    There's a reason for everything.
    Don't worry.

    Sorry that I haven't updated Decisions, Decisions in such a long time.
    I'm trying my best to find time to write, but homework is eating me alive at the moment.

    Anywho, thanks for commenting!
    September 21st, 2009 at 09:27pm
  • erratic

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    Aww, you're too sweet!
    Thanks for sticking with Jamais Vu until the end.
    I really appreciate it, yo!
    <3
    September 21st, 2009 at 02:39pm
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    I kon witwas filler-ish.

    I warned people it would be.

    But it was necessary to set up for the next chappy.

    Thanks, again, for your luverly comment
    September 17th, 2009 at 12:37am
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    glad yo meet you captain :)
    September 16th, 2009 at 04:26pm
  • erratic

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    Woohoo!
    I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
    It was tough figuring out how they'd spend their last day together.

    Thanks for commenting!
    September 11th, 2009 at 01:56pm
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    Nah, I think I got it now

    And thankies.

    I have to rewrite every chapter at least a hundred times to get it to sound that way. lol
    September 4th, 2009 at 12:46am
  • erratic

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    Just got your batch of comments on Decisions, Decisions.

    Ever since Lasting Impression really started picking up speed, I've been trying to respond to all the feedback that people posted. After all, you guys are taking the time to comment, so it only makes sense that I return the favor ;)

    Just about everyone is thinking the same way about Paul. They think he's sweet and all, but they're still on Team Alex.

    The reunion at Starbucks was meant to be really awkward, so I'm glad that came across.

    Thanks for all the feedback, yo!
    I really appreciate it.
    XD
    September 3rd, 2009 at 01:58pm
  • erratic

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    Thank you for the compliment!
    I put a lot of effort into making Jamais Vu seem realistic.
    ;D
    September 3rd, 2009 at 01:52pm
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    Thankies so much for the comment

    =)

    What do you mean by great language?

    I'm confuzzled
    August 24th, 2009 at 10:22pm
  • erratic

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    Yes.
    Penis love.
    XD
    August 24th, 2009 at 01:36pm
  • erratic

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    Aww.
    I'm glad you liked Lasting Impression.
    I'm really proud of that story.
    ;)

    Thank you for reading!
    August 20th, 2009 at 04:59pm
  • erratic

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    lol.
    It looks like everyone enjoyed drunk Alex.
    XD

    Thanks for commenting, yo!
    August 18th, 2009 at 07:39pm
  • erratic

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    hehe.
    I'm glad you're liking Jamais Vu.
    It's a nice change from all the drama in Lasting Impression.
    ;)
    August 7th, 2009 at 05:34pm