at this hour, no i can't lol. i wasn't able to fall asleep until late last night and then i had to drive my dad to work today at 7:30 so i could borrow his car for the day since mine's not here :( i feel like a zombie lol
yeah, but then sometimes i feel like mine are like that too. but i feel as if a good majority of the time i'm able to tie loose ends, if you will lol. like i understand plot more, you know?
wow that makes me sound like a bitch lol :p
hahahah if you're talking about the chapter you posted today it was fucking great, i'm glad he didn't leave lol. he's such a character
hahahaha that is so true. some of the ones on here have a lot of potential but they rush through cruical points and i'm like "whyyyyyyyyyyyyy are you doing this?" there's good shit there and they're like "ok next chapter"
point taken hahah
frank fleeting? what's that mean, him leaving? don't break it up! long chapters are cool too!!
lol i know you wouldn't, i was kidding. i've actually thought about that myself when i'm reading someone else's story. i'm like, hmmmm what can i change that would make it a million times better lol. it's just fun to think about
well yeah, but mystery can be a branch off dark, because bad stuff usually happens in mysteries. weird stuff too. so i like to think that mystery and dark tend to go hand in hand :)
i don't get it either. your ideas are always great and your writing's awesome :) i'm sorry that it doesn't get noticed as much. but geez don't copy anyone, that'll get you bad publicity lol
wow that's a lot! but still, at least you're getting noticed, i wouldn't worry too much about it!
well mibba people are weird, let's just throw that out there now lol. we're all weird. if we weren't, i don't think any of us would be able to write the shit we do. so it may not be to everyone's taste, but it seems like you found something better, something more legit ;)
mystery huh? well, i guess it could be because your story does leave the reader wanting more. like who was the girl, how did she die, what happened to her, who's the guy, and stuff like that. so, i think it does fit in a way. do you know what other categories there are?
I can honestly say it was never my intention to have a three-way relationship. I never thought about it. I just know that my Frank and Mikey would never be up for it. However, there will be a three-way scene. Because I can x]
That's cool! =] Well I'm glad you've found something for you. Freak Show is one of many stories on my must-read list, I'm sorry that I haven't kept up with it =/ but I'm glad you found a new site you like ^_^
well that's good to hear! maybe you've found your true website lol.
oh good, did you find it ok? i was pretty sure it was in the first paragraph.
i'm not saying it is, but after 3 months of hearing how bad it is lol i just notice it a lot more now. i catch myself doing it still, but i'm trying to correct it. i just wish i knew which was the "correct" way you know? lol my writing children's stories teacher told me that adverbs were making a comeback, i wanted to be like "when did they ever go away?" hahah