I do not have a problem with your story Its just that I normally stay clear of story with God in them so I won't get butt hurt, but I really like this story and do not want to stop reading it. My comment was meant to be a piece of friendly advice not an insult. I have reread my comment and can now see where you might think it was an insult but I really did not want to upset you. And I'm sorry that I did insult you cause I do like allot of your story's including "if your mine" and did not mean to hurt your feelings.-Kim
Oh and I really like you story "if your mine" but I just won't to say you might want to be careful with the God thing cause where I don't force my belief in God on others I don't like when people say bad thing about Him and somebody I was reading earlier started to get into real blasphemy and made allot of her readers very upset. Again I am not accusing you of anything and I do not want you to be mad at me, I am just kind of begging you not to say anything bad about God.
I don't get that impression at all.
She seems like a very caring person, who's simply stuck between two people -- which happens to everyone at some point. She desperately wants to do what will make her happy, but she doesn't want anyone hurt because of it.
And the weak thing? She ventured out on her own, and is taking care of herself and two pets in the middle of unfamiliar territory. That makes her strong :)